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2021-06-02 18:51

THİS NOVEL İS SO GOOD. hmm i dont like unemotional mc's but i like that mc because. he is emotional but cant show it. 1 i think mc needs a rival equal to him(rival should be same age as mc)(he can be like son of life or something like that ahadshahahahha) 2 İ think you should not give superabundant powers to mc You may find it difficult to control. 3 AND MOST İMPORTANT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE describe characters. i cant remember the character you introduced to me 100 chapters ago 4 and i think you act like we can see what you dreamed of when you writing. you should describe places to us 5 dont missunderstand me this is one of best novels i have ever read so i dont want it go bad. i just write what i want to see. AND MOST İMPORTANT THİNG İ LOVE YOU PLEASE PLEASE MOST CHAPTERS(SORRY FOR BAD ENGLAND)

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Hello, this is Author's review at Ch 432. There have been a few changes from how I wanted the novel to be when I started writing it, 18 months ago. If you are okay with spoilers, you can continue to read. These are the few things the readers can expect from Vol. 6. 1) MC will stay as OP as ever 2) MC finally moves from a good and naive fellow to a grey character, although his actions lean toward lesser evil from time to time, at least if seen through the lens of a third party. 3) MC gets back to his original timeline at Ch 421. 4) No Harem but cannot promise that he will stick to one girl until the end. It depends entirely on the flow of the story. 5) He will constantly make time travel to the past and the future, all over the novel, but they will be short trips, not like the one that dragged until Vol 5. 6) The gods from Greek mythology, Angels, Elves, and gods or characters from other mythologies will also make their appearance. However, please treat them like Marvel or DC characters. 7) Tournaments lasted quite long until now. In future chapters, even if there are any tournaments, I'll try my best to increase the chapter length on battles and lessen the number of chapters instead. 8) For those who have yet to start, I remind you that characters in the novel can live for hundreds or thousands of years. So, the earlier 1000-year headstart doesn't mean that MC is dead. He is only missing. 9) As for when we will get to Year 3015 when the story starts in the first chapter, it can only depend on the flow of the story. I, the author has no draft prepared beforehand. I just write the chapter on a daily basis and upload it on the same day. 10) Time Traveling is still a fictional concept to mankind. So, I don't need to follow the same rules displayed in some popular novels, tv series, or movies with time travel. Please be understanding even if the author's logic doesn't make sense to you. 11) Last but not least, I use English as a third language and I don't have any editor or translator. If there are mistakes in grammar, please correct me through paragraph comments. * Thank you *

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