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Unero21
Unero21Lv42yr
2022-03-27 19:49

in all honesty I expected more from this novel. author is decently skilled in writing so reading chapter after chapter is a pleasure but. And here comes problems, MC is a kid, so he is inexperienced, lacking a skill to handle both fighting situations and daily decisions, which won't be a problem if not for a slow progress. he is overly reliant on his Arcana, which is a source of power unique for every awakened person and since the stronger Arcana the more intelligent it is, he is just played by it like a full and beeing manipulated. that's a main reason why I dropped this novel, this and idea of time travel which honestly was introduced too early into a story and created a massive mess. So basically is hard to enjoy reading about this puppet like MC. For a plus, side character are nicely written and they ve got a decent amount of time, but they just can't carry thus story alone.

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Snowstar
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754 Chs

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Tidal479
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I am really enjoying reading this. The setting is really interesting to me because for some reason I thought it was medieval, but it's not it's modern.

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TempeGoreng
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THANATOS_
THANATOS_Lv4

Decided to read a bit since it was rated so high. I was an idiot to fall for it again. As bad as the writing style and dialogues can be(are), the translation quality of the novels here just leaves me slack jawed and in awe of how the site can keep on putting up novels of such 'amazing' quality.

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Snowstar
SnowstarAuthor

Hello, this is Author's review at Ch 432. There have been a few changes from how I wanted the novel to be when I started writing it, 18 months ago. If you are okay with spoilers, you can continue to read. These are the few things the readers can expect from Vol. 6. 1) MC will stay as OP as ever 2) MC finally moves from a good and naive fellow to a grey character, although his actions lean toward lesser evil from time to time, at least if seen through the lens of a third party. 3) MC gets back to his original timeline at Ch 421. 4) No Harem but cannot promise that he will stick to one girl until the end. It depends entirely on the flow of the story. 5) He will constantly make time travel to the past and the future, all over the novel, but they will be short trips, not like the one that dragged until Vol 5. 6) The gods from Greek mythology, Angels, Elves, and gods or characters from other mythologies will also make their appearance. However, please treat them like Marvel or DC characters. 7) Tournaments lasted quite long until now. In future chapters, even if there are any tournaments, I'll try my best to increase the chapter length on battles and lessen the number of chapters instead. 8) For those who have yet to start, I remind you that characters in the novel can live for hundreds or thousands of years. So, the earlier 1000-year headstart doesn't mean that MC is dead. He is only missing. 9) As for when we will get to Year 3015 when the story starts in the first chapter, it can only depend on the flow of the story. I, the author has no draft prepared beforehand. I just write the chapter on a daily basis and upload it on the same day. 10) Time Traveling is still a fictional concept to mankind. So, I don't need to follow the same rules displayed in some popular novels, tv series, or movies with time travel. Please be understanding even if the author's logic doesn't make sense to you. 11) Last but not least, I use English as a third language and I don't have any editor or translator. If there are mistakes in grammar, please correct me through paragraph comments. * Thank you *

2yr
Chaoticgoose
ChaoticgooseLv2

Very good novel, not the greatest translation still reasonable. However very let down with Azrael being Azzy/Rael half the time also hate the romance with him and Claire. Honestly think its better to kill her off because the entire thing is trash even getting together was stupid.

2yr
Imaginarywishes
ImaginarywishesLv2

The story was nice up until the 27 years in the past part. Also if Azzy (I totally didn't forget the spelling of his actual name) is the heir of the clan then why wasn't he getting better training for the first 3 years?

2yr
Duke_Sexent
Duke_SexentLv2

was enjoying it until the time travel part , sad to drop this ....

1yr
Mekachi_Kun
Mekachi_KunLv2

Gettin' kinda "stir-crazy, " you heard this I wonder what the meaning of "lazy" or life without work is Kawaii shinigami at your service Mark your enemies, and I'll show them what hurt is! Merciless, but what else should I be? Sudden nice-guy gap, but that's honesty A blood price to be paid, but I promise, it's worth this On-demand-homicidal-circus! All ya really gotta do is sign on the dotted line It's probably fine, right? Sike! Your soul is mine It's all good, being a Dead Beat's got benefits We'll be "best friends, " that's the end of it Then I get a rush of adrenaline, I think I like you! Wanna feel my five-foot scythe inside you I would die for you!!! And that adorable scream Curious, would you die for me?

3yr
noval_patel
noval_patelLv5

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