Item: In MHA with Star Platinum
Rating: 2
Author: raithena

raithenaLv41yr

2023-03-23 18:38

Story is fine, start was good as well but, MC personality is a deal-breaker. Like he is super arrogant. Tries to forcefully act cool, act as if he is guilty for liking another woman when he already has girlfriend. Basically ;- MC Bad Story Good Harem Bad

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