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AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv144yr
2021-01-19 19:53

okay so the story flows decently i guess but the mc lets people provoke him without trying to defend himself or telling them to shut up he doesnt show off his power to people at all and stuff anyone that doesnt like such stories like me leave before you feel youre brain dying

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KatMilk
KatMilkLv13

Wow you actually gave a review that is concise and clear. Good for you whiny baby.

AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv14

lol when im irritated i cant write good reviews i was really irritated backthan cuz thay one guy kept arguing with me

KatMilk:Wow you actually gave a review that is concise and clear. Good for you whiny baby.
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JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

Wow, you actually gave a review that shows concisely how low your comprehension is. Not everything should be done by "showing-off". Patience, timing and how exactly you would do it, is important as well. Jack seems to also do it in a way that mentally affects his enemies or so. AKA, humiliation and shame. Sigh.

AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv14

well clearly im.not talking to people who like the story so get outta here this is a review for people who have the same tastes as me for them to know they dont like this stop going around complaining god people like these really cant handle that people have different tastes

JustABoxWithAmmo:Wow, you actually gave a review that shows concisely how low your comprehension is. Not everything should be done by "showing-off". Patience, timing and how exactly you would do it, is important as well. Jack seems to also do it in a way that mentally affects his enemies or so. AKA, humiliation and shame. Sigh.
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

Different tastes? Do you lack comprehension or something? Read what I said again. I gave an explanation as to "why" Its like this. Have you even tried looking at the other direction instead of just headlessly choosing one? You should think more on the "why" instead of just your own personal opinion, that makes no sense at all, to even put it in "my own taste". By your logic, shouldn't you also stop complaining? Mate, I recommend that you try to do fact check before you say anything. Your just embarrasing yourself. Don't be so offended either, lol.

AshuraMikoto:well clearly im.not talking to people who like the story so get outta here this is a review for people who have the same tastes as me for them to know they dont like this stop going around complaining god people like these really cant handle that people have different tastes
AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv14

once again i dont care what you feel but people have different tastes i like more evil and violent mcs if u dont like them then get out this is a review for people who have the same tastes as i

JustABoxWithAmmo:Different tastes? Do you lack comprehension or something? Read what I said again. I gave an explanation as to "why" Its like this. Have you even tried looking at the other direction instead of just headlessly choosing one? You should think more on the "why" instead of just your own personal opinion, that makes no sense at all, to even put it in "my own taste". By your logic, shouldn't you also stop complaining? Mate, I recommend that you try to do fact check before you say anything. Your just embarrasing yourself. Don't be so offended either, lol.
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

LOL. Mate, this has nothing to do with tastes. Have you ever heard of "humiliation"? Its like giving a person a longer-humiliation or shame. If you do it quickly, then it wont last so long on that person, nor would it be as effective. Jack is basically "evil" in this regard. Also, this isn't taste, tf are you rambling about? This is just your own biased opinion, without any reasonable reason as to why. In sense, this isn't taste, but nonsense. Litterally, you are nonsense.

AshuraMikoto:once again i dont care what you feel but people have different tastes i like more evil and violent mcs if u dont like them then get out this is a review for people who have the same tastes as i
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

Is that sarcasm, lol?

KatMilk:Wow you actually gave a review that is concise and clear. Good for you whiny baby.
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AshuraMikoto
AshuraMikotoLv14

stop already and get youre head out of youre ass this is my opinion my review get out of here if u got a problem make youre own review and leave me alonea review is a opinion about the story my review is my opinion its not youre opinion and i wont change my opinion just because u want me to

JustABoxWithAmmo:LOL. Mate, this has nothing to do with tastes. Have you ever heard of "humiliation"? Its like giving a person a longer-humiliation or shame. If you do it quickly, then it wont last so long on that person, nor would it be as effective. Jack is basically "evil" in this regard. Also, this isn't taste, tf are you rambling about? This is just your own biased opinion, without any reasonable reason as to why. In sense, this isn't taste, but nonsense. Litterally, you are nonsense.
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

Your opinion is like this: You believe in your own world basically. For example, Character is 23 years old litterally, but you refuse and say that he is 20 years old, despite being given facts and such. Opinion? Opinion my as$, This is more like you lacking comprehension, and confusing things with your own damaged perspective of reality. Mine Isn't a opinion when I litterally give you facts that counters what you said. Either you get the fk out of here, or just stfu.

AshuraMikoto:stop already and get youre head out of youre ass this is my opinion my review get out of here if u got a problem make youre own review and leave me alonea review is a opinion about the story my review is my opinion its not youre opinion and i wont change my opinion just because u want me to
Venerabe_Yun
Venerabe_YunLv3

Thanks for info bro

Genocidal_Soul
Genocidal_SoulLv3

My my...

Phe0nix_fir3
Phe0nix_fir3Lv2

i agree

AshuraMikoto:stop already and get youre head out of youre ass this is my opinion my review get out of here if u got a problem make youre own review and leave me alonea review is a opinion about the story my review is my opinion its not youre opinion and i wont change my opinion just because u want me to
Phe0nix_fir3
Phe0nix_fir3Lv2

wow actual twitter retard stfu if he has a different opinion just let him be himself just because you gave him reasons of why the story is like this dosen't mean he has to change his type of enjoyement to like what you want fucking zoomers thinking themselves they are some geniuses.

JustABoxWithAmmo:Your opinion is like this: You believe in your own world basically. For example, Character is 23 years old litterally, but you refuse and say that he is 20 years old, despite being given facts and such. Opinion? Opinion my as$, This is more like you lacking comprehension, and confusing things with your own damaged perspective of reality. Mine Isn't a opinion when I litterally give you facts that counters what you said. Either you get the fk out of here, or just stfu.
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

That's the same as saying that opinion matters the most in the face of the "truth". If you don't like a character just because of misunderstanding, then shouldn't a random person offer the truth, just so that the other does not have a "misunderstanding" over a story? Opinion matters crap in the face of truth. If you still uphold that "opinion" is more important, then thats the same as saying that a person should have his opinion of 'right', to like rap i s t characters, then you are no different than a sick and twisted person. "a murderer, that is a psychopath, should still live because I like his character!" Then you may have to do a check on your mental aspect, as to whether or not you ARE insane, or not.

Phe0nix_fir3:wow actual twitter retard stfu if he has a different opinion just let him be himself just because you gave him reasons of why the story is like this dosen't mean he has to change his type of enjoyement to like what you want fucking zoomers thinking themselves they are some geniuses.
JustABoxWithAmmo
JustABoxWithAmmoLv13

This guy's so called "review" is more of an unreasonable opinion and taste, as to whether he wants to like a character or not. Taste? more like "misunderstanding". He didn't even put up a "good" reason as to why he doesn't like a "character". If I see an character, that is just hot-headed and "annoying" without a reason, then I have the right to state my opinion as to why "I" don't like a character for that reason, WHICH actually gives my opinion a more sturdier wall to lean against, so to speak, in a sense. Yes, it might be annoying as to why it takes so "long", but the end result is more satisfying after waiting so long. Just like the same saying: "A fruit tastes better when its ripe, compared to when its not fully ripe." Which basically translates to: Patience.

Phe0nix_fir3:wow actual twitter retard stfu if he has a different opinion just let him be himself just because you gave him reasons of why the story is like this dosen't mean he has to change his type of enjoyement to like what you want fucking zoomers thinking themselves they are some geniuses.
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