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SimmeringHours
SimmeringHoursLv104yr
2021-01-06 00:43

The story is pretty good so far. I like the quality and detailed background and all, just MC needs to show off power more, though I get why he's not, reasonable motives. Maybe less buildup, more climax scenes. Or just write more, don't leave us waiting. Keep it up!

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