Review Detail of Riyah404 in The Forgotten Lands

In general, I like the story. I like the idea of cultivators x vampire., But I think the story is a bit rushed. Too many time skips. It would be better if we can see how the main character develops his power and became so strong., since the story started since Kai was a baby. And it was sad to see his parents die. I was hoping to see more of a father and son bonding., Grammar needs a bit of improvement. This story has a potential. Keep on updating., :)