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SeventhSong
SeventhSongLv23yr
2021-01-10 16:16

This is pretty interesting, plot is good, though not my favorite genre. Keep writing I'm sure it will be great! (BTW what's YULETIDE? Don't understand the name)

THE YULETIDE BET

snarkydove
4.6
57 Chs

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snarkydove
snarkydoveAuthor

it was for the new year contest. Yuletide like the Christmas yuletide. Thanks for the review

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azukaegoashioma
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The writer just made me attracted to this book like a magnet, I honestly just started reading the book but even the beginning is amazing, a big thumbs up to the writer.

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Candy_Berry_2521
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This story though my first story in this site is worth reading. Likes how the author portrays her characters, and the way the story flows . I will just say that it is a book worth giving a chance and I promise you won't be disappointed.

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Ajadu_Solomon
Ajadu_SolomonLv1

The book is interesting, the author did an amazing job with the characters and the story line and also I like as the story has a fresh story line that we are not used to reading. Keep it up author

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Folasade_Sotubo
Folasade_SotuboLv1

Good plot, interesting story line, good character development. Hooks the reader from the first chapter. Likes the way the author despicts her characters and the flow of the story line perfect. Looking forward to more updates from the author. Kudos, keep it up

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RinCCa
RinCCaLv2

a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes

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Kenlinvert_L
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Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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Fostr
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Reveal spoiler

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Kenlinvert_L
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DaoistjPjjS6
DaoistjPjjS6Lv1

Yeah I gave a 5 star review because the book is worth it, so give it a trial. The author captivates you with her plot , her characters and the story line is fresh giving you something to read that hasn't been over produced

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Xyenox_chip
Xyenox_chipLv1

The first thing I like about this is the fact that it is a fresh, new concept which is refreshing since a lot of things in web novels are recycled things but the author still needs a bit of time to flesh everything out. Good luck!

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