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SeventhSong

SeventhSong

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“To sleep, perchance to to dream”

2020-05-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong3 years ago
    Posted

    Doesn't seem bad, but it feels like I've seen something similar before. Also the different types of cultivation systems can get abit confusing

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Commented

    That’s not true past me, Secret Arts only have one move. Aster’s “Secret Arts” are modified versions

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Replied to SeventhSong

    I agree with past me

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Commented

    The fight scene could see some improvements

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Posted

    I'm here (after two chapters)!!! Not exactly my cup of tea, but looks pretty good :) Could be better though but we all improve right haha?

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Replied to snarkydove

    Thanks mate!

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Posted

    This is pretty interesting, plot is good, though not my favorite genre. Keep writing I'm sure it will be great! (BTW what's YULETIDE? Don't understand the name)

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Posted

    HAH I can already see a giant eagle in my dreams XD Gammer and stuff may need a fix but seems good. Keep writing I wanna see where this goes!

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Posted

    Self Review! Despite the 5 stars, I don't really think it's that good. Because of school and poor time management, updates will be erratic. I'm also new to writing, so character design, worldbuilding, and development will be rocky. Quality ain't the best, but feedback would help! [Quest: Self Review Complete!] [Gained Title: Shameless Author] [With luck and work, Title may evolve to Good Author!]

  • SeventhSong
    SeventhSong4 years ago
    Posted

    Hi Taco I'm hereeeeeeeee I am at the beginning, and it seems to be off to a good start. Main Character kinda cocky though. The names are... interesting but won't judge. Humor brightens up almost everything.

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