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Folasade_SotuboLv14yr
2020-12-25 19:16

Good plot, interesting story line, good character development. Hooks the reader from the first chapter. Likes the way the author despicts her characters and the flow of the story line perfect. Looking forward to more updates from the author. Kudos, keep it up

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The writer just made me attracted to this book like a magnet, I honestly just started reading the book but even the beginning is amazing, a big thumbs up to the writer.

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This story though my first story in this site is worth reading. Likes how the author portrays her characters, and the way the story flows . I will just say that it is a book worth giving a chance and I promise you won't be disappointed.

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The book is interesting, the author did an amazing job with the characters and the story line and also I like as the story has a fresh story line that we are not used to reading. Keep it up author

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RinCCa
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a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes

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Yeah I gave a 5 star review because the book is worth it, so give it a trial. The author captivates you with her plot , her characters and the story line is fresh giving you something to read that hasn't been over produced

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The first thing I like about this is the fact that it is a fresh, new concept which is refreshing since a lot of things in web novels are recycled things but the author still needs a bit of time to flesh everything out. Good luck!

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