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Review Detail of ArthurZ in Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

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ArthurZ
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Great book hope you don't drop author pls. hope to get tsunade kaguya and konan in the harem of the mc. also will he stop the destruction of uzushiogakure from the attack or nah? also (٥↼_↼) you know... but she prolly young for him right? 😭

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Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

Yasashiki

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Yasashiki
YasashikiAuthorYasashiki

I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)

ArthurZ
ArthurZLv4ArthurZ

will she be apprentice due to him possibly learning about seals in the future? will he be her uncle or onii chan. or both?? FIND OUT NEXT TIME ON THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z

Yasashiki:I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)
Atlas_Evergreen
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Dang it ill just read a diffrent book then

Yasashiki:I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)
Dark_Magma
Dark_MagmaLv4Dark_Magma

u doing what i am gonna do exactly brother

Atlas_Evergreen:Dang it ill just read a diffrent book then
Dark_Magma
Dark_MagmaLv4Dark_Magma

its a shame that people dont try getting her tho... for me although she followed through minato's decision, she still showed that she did care for naruto making her a good mom meaning that in a way she is a good waifu to get... well...i know it will take a LONG while for me to rekeep reading ur book after today cuz of this like fuk the plot!!!! anyway everything was cool man so i hope u at least dont drop...

Yasashiki:I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)
Dark_Magma
Dark_MagmaLv4Dark_Magma

my bad i confused ur novel with another one and thought u were supposed to take in 5 other girls my bad lol. seems ill be still reading ur story... the confusion was due to me suddenly rehaving an interest in soul land fanfics and having stopped reading my current fanfics so my bad😅😅😅

Yasashiki:I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)
Dark_Magma
Dark_MagmaLv4Dark_Magma

i like the pic its noice

Yasashiki
YasashikiAuthorYasashiki

Don't worry about that. And about Kushina she still won't be with Mc in a romantic relationship. But I promise an interesting turn of events when I get far enough in the story, after all, Mc did change the future...

Dark_Magma:my bad i confused ur novel with another one and thought u were supposed to take in 5 other girls my bad lol. seems ill be still reading ur story... the confusion was due to me suddenly rehaving an interest in soul land fanfics and having stopped reading my current fanfics so my bad😅😅😅
Dark_Magma
Dark_MagmaLv4Dark_Magma

yeah well when i reread the haren candidates and saw konan, tsunade and kaguya i thought that not including kushina was not that much of a trouble... i mean a lot of people dont include these guys in their harem list or lover candidate cuz they too old or to follow plot... i mean they need to have guts and do something unpredictable right? anyway altho i cant read ur fic right now i will still read it later tho as it does have lots of potentiel and uniqueness so keep it up.

Yasashiki:Don't worry about that. And about Kushina she still won't be with Mc in a romantic relationship. But I promise an interesting turn of events when I get far enough in the story, after all, Mc did change the future...
JunRaya
JunRayaLv4JunRaya

Naruto is hated by the village because he has 9 tails and is now hated by us the readers because of his exsistance

Yasashiki:I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)
Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

Author just tell us clear, i don't like those mc who takes disciple and train i mean. She is a good waifu. ,,if she is in harem then im in, i don't wanna see her another man take her 😗,when it's our mc to make her stronger or whatever

Yasashiki:Don't worry about that. And about Kushina she still won't be with Mc in a romantic relationship. But I promise an interesting turn of events when I get far enough in the story, after all, Mc did change the future...
Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv2Man_of_culture_69

Haah, not hated, bcs main villain already in harem so everything has changed just small fries and i think world will make someone else hero and u know every world has conscious

JunRaya:Naruto is hated by the village because he has 9 tails and is now hated by us the readers because of his exsistance
Aklyf
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I guess with above image 😜why readers want to save uzumaki village ""All for greater good"😆

ThanatosGreekGod
ThanatosGreekGodLv14ThanatosGreekGod

cant minato die but mc saves kushinq and then they date or something?

Yasashiki:I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)
Crimson_King
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Just curious but why dont you want Kushina as a love interest? Many people like myself always ask for her but the number of good stories that actually ise her are few to none. Especially here on Webnovel unless its one of those full on lemon stories but i dont take those seriously. Personally you can always just make Naruto the son of Minato and some orher random Uzumaki women. Its not like Naruto unlocks any special abilitiy from the Uzumaki clan so his mom not having the chains isnt a big problem. Its what i would do just to take Kushina while having an answer for canon, if canon is trully that important that it is.

Yasashiki:I already know what I want to do with uzushiogakure so I wont spoil it now... And I know Kushina could have been a choice but I dont want to delete Naruto existence 😅 (I could make the Mc a father and the child would be replacing Naruto but meh) Though I already know what I want to do with the relationship between the Mc and Kushina. (Not a romantic or sexual relationship)
Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

So Konan and Kaguya are possible but somehow Kushina cant be added? Makes no sense, well at least Konan makes sense but Kaguya is difficult to add. No reason why Kushina should be any harder. Naruto mother could just be any random female Uzumaki, not like he inherited any Uzumaki powers from Kushina anyway.

Dark_Magma:yeah well when i reread the haren candidates and saw konan, tsunade and kaguya i thought that not including kushina was not that much of a trouble... i mean a lot of people dont include these guys in their harem list or lover candidate cuz they too old or to follow plot... i mean they need to have guts and do something unpredictable right? anyway altho i cant read ur fic right now i will still read it later tho as it does have lots of potentiel and uniqueness so keep it up.
Yasashiki
YasashikiAuthorYasashiki

Honestly, the reason why she isn’t is that I left the choice to the readers who wanted Kaguya and Konan back when I barely started to write the story, and I didn’t put Kushina in the list of potential lovers because at that time I was unsure of changing certain things in the plot. If I were to rewrite one day, Kushina would be with the Mc for sure, but I don’t want to add her now since I promised 3 lovers maximum.

Crimson_King:Just curious but why dont you want Kushina as a love interest? Many people like myself always ask for her but the number of good stories that actually ise her are few to none. Especially here on Webnovel unless its one of those full on lemon stories but i dont take those seriously. Personally you can always just make Naruto the son of Minato and some orher random Uzumaki women. Its not like Naruto unlocks any special abilitiy from the Uzumaki clan so his mom not having the chains isnt a big problem. Its what i would do just to take Kushina while having an answer for canon, if canon is trully that important that it is.
Crimson_King
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Well thats a real shame. Guess thats the problem with not having things planned properly. Or letting the readers choose. Letting is choose is a nice way for us to interact but it shouldnt be so powerful that it changes YOUR story to please us. Personally i think your first mistake was making a story earlier in the Naruro timeline and not planning to change things. Going back that far for the story but then leaving Canon the same is useless. By that point you might as well not even make the story. If you make an MC born early like First Ninja war time period, personally i expect changes like having Tsunade or Kushina as love interest and saving the Uzumaki and Uchiha clan. If you wont make any changes like that then tou might as well just make the MC be born in Narutos time. Cause the MC wouldnt have done anything significant beforehand anyway.

Yasashiki:Honestly, the reason why she isn’t is that I left the choice to the readers who wanted Kaguya and Konan back when I barely started to write the story, and I didn’t put Kushina in the list of potential lovers because at that time I was unsure of changing certain things in the plot. If I were to rewrite one day, Kushina would be with the Mc for sure, but I don’t want to add her now since I promised 3 lovers maximum.
Yasashiki
YasashikiAuthorYasashiki

Well, a lot of things are different from the canon (Uzushiogakure, Uchiha, the Shinobi Wars, the Kages, Jinchūriki, some people who died far earlier while others are still alive, etc….) and honestly, I just didn’t intend to change Kushina and Minato being together but like I said, I wouldn’t mind doing it if I were to rewrite. I intended to have Kushina and Mc linked by a Father-Daughter kind of relationship since I didn’t add her as a lover and that’s how it is in this story. So things ended up as I planned and changes were made, something that was bound to happen since I started at the Sannin’s era and I dislike story that follows the canon, it’s lazy writing. This will be quite a spoiler but I think it’s at the same time easy to guess: The ending I envisioned would be once the whole Otsutsuki Clan is eradicated from the world, well, Kaguya excluded, which would happen around the time where the Naruto canon begins, unless I end up writing more than intended which can happen, who knows. I can’t say how much more chapters I will write but we’re getting closer to it, maybe it will end around the 100th. But yeah, you’re saying it like I didn’t change anything when I did… Kushina’s just an exception, heck, I did in fact almost make her end up with someone else (not Mc but not Minato as well) but with how the story was going, making her fall in love with Minato ended up working well. Anyway, I hope that you will give this story a try, you’re actually the first guy in a long time who replied when I responded to something they asked instead of complaining to then leave without a word.

Crimson_King:Well thats a real shame. Guess thats the problem with not having things planned properly. Or letting the readers choose. Letting is choose is a nice way for us to interact but it shouldnt be so powerful that it changes YOUR story to please us. Personally i think your first mistake was making a story earlier in the Naruro timeline and not planning to change things. Going back that far for the story but then leaving Canon the same is useless. By that point you might as well not even make the story. If you make an MC born early like First Ninja war time period, personally i expect changes like having Tsunade or Kushina as love interest and saving the Uzumaki and Uchiha clan. If you wont make any changes like that then tou might as well just make the MC be born in Narutos time. Cause the MC wouldnt have done anything significant beforehand anyway.
Crimson_King
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Its my pleasure. I actually enjoy having conversations like this with other readers or better yet the Authors. Even if we have differing views on how the story should be handles i find it jnteresting to hear new ideas and views and plot ideas. Personally i would have hated if you really went eith giving Kushina a whole new love interest. As far as im concerned if its not the MC then just leave her with Minato. Reason my comment made it dound like tou didnt change anything was because i havent read the story. I dont know what you have done, all i know is the love interests are Tsunade, Kaguya and Konan and Kushina was rejected out of the notion that you didnt want to change Canon. When i talked about Kushina and either changing Canon like Saving her country, saving Uchiha etc i was trying to be broad since i dont know what changes you made. Im actually on a binge of Naruto stories currently my favorite is Naruto: Aokiji Yuki but I havent gotten theougj all of them. Ive read the Sic Paths of realms and Overhaul in Naruto. Still have a few more like Reincarnation as an Anbu interrogator and I-Danzo. Yours i saw yesterday when i was adding all the other Naruto stories but i dont know why it didnt grab my attention. I guess it was mostly cause i was hoping for Kushina and them found that it was denied lol

Yasashiki:Well, a lot of things are different from the canon (Uzushiogakure, Uchiha, the Shinobi Wars, the Kages, Jinchūriki, some people who died far earlier while others are still alive, etc….) and honestly, I just didn’t intend to change Kushina and Minato being together but like I said, I wouldn’t mind doing it if I were to rewrite. I intended to have Kushina and Mc linked by a Father-Daughter kind of relationship since I didn’t add her as a lover and that’s how it is in this story. So things ended up as I planned and changes were made, something that was bound to happen since I started at the Sannin’s era and I dislike story that follows the canon, it’s lazy writing. This will be quite a spoiler but I think it’s at the same time easy to guess: The ending I envisioned would be once the whole Otsutsuki Clan is eradicated from the world, well, Kaguya excluded, which would happen around the time where the Naruto canon begins, unless I end up writing more than intended which can happen, who knows. I can’t say how much more chapters I will write but we’re getting closer to it, maybe it will end around the 100th. But yeah, you’re saying it like I didn’t change anything when I did… Kushina’s just an exception, heck, I did in fact almost make her end up with someone else (not Mc but not Minato as well) but with how the story was going, making her fall in love with Minato ended up working well. Anyway, I hope that you will give this story a try, you’re actually the first guy in a long time who replied when I responded to something they asked instead of complaining to then leave without a word.