Review Detail of Abood_Ghoul_3288 in The Fat God System

Item: The Fat God System
Rating: 4.8

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Abood_Ghoul_3288Lv33yrAbood_Ghoul_3288

very good so far the only criticism i could say about this novel is properly the lack of description for example i would appreciate it if the author added more knowledge about things introduced like the academy the number of students and other misc the same for the system as i noticed that when ever the mcs transform their is a change of personality and many more stuff other than that its pretty amazing considering that it still in the early chapters

The Fat God System

KangarooCruz

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KangarooCruzAuthorKangarooCruz

Thanks for the review! When I read a novel I usually ignore those kinds of details, so I forget to put it in my novel. I will try to give a more definite description from now on!

3yr

Abood_Ghoul_3288Lv3Abood_Ghoul_3288

thanks for responding and it would be amazing if you did as i feel it adds a lot more to the world bulding in this novel and for people like me it gives a better immerscive feeling

KangarooCruz:Thanks for the review! When I read a novel I usually ignore those kinds of details, so I forget to put it in my novel. I will try to give a more definite description from now on!

3yr