Review Detail of EXPLOSIONGOD in The Fat God System
Review detail
A novel that is worth your time. Had better Grammer than most orginal novels not perfect but pretty good. Has a unique plot but it does have a superficial character the bully that seems to hate the main character for no reason. Overall has a lot of potential would recommend. My suggestion for improvement would be more in depth characters.
The Fat God System
KangarooCruz
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As the novel goes on, the characters would be fleshed out and given glimpses of backstory that would give meaning to the actions of the characters. I am also planning to give the side characters more roles to give them a real feeling and emulate a school environment. Thanks for writing a review! Hope you continue to read as I write this story!
KangarooCruz:As the novel goes on, the characters would be fleshed out and given glimpses of backstory that would give meaning to the actions of the characters. I am also planning to give the side characters more roles to give them a real feeling and emulate a school environment. Thanks for writing a review! Hope you continue to read as I write this story!
Nothing is set in stone, but there will probably hints here and there because a school life is bound to have romance.
GodxOwn:any romance?
KangarooCruz:Nothing is set in stone, but there will probably hints here and there because a school life is bound to have romance.