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Djabilong
DjabilongLv63yr
2021-04-06 01:04

The story itself is exceptionally good, but here's a fair warning: MC is essentially a massive cuckold for all intents and purposes. Before starting he changes the world's setting from ecchi to hentai, making 99% of women either loose village bicycles, bi, or outright lesbian with straight ones rarer than a pink elephant. Quite a lot of them (including genderbent Issei) join his pokemon harem for the sole reason of fucking his other girls, which he not only tolerates but also actively promotes at every junction. So yeah, there's that.

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DevilNutTrigger
DevilNutTriggerLv14

Mah nigga be spittin’ facts.

Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

UPD: read up till the freshest available chapter and I'm saddened to inform you that it gets signifficantly worse as it goes on. Four main problems are a) it devolves into copypasted smut with pretty much every girl in the pokeharem sharing the same exact single archetype, they are basically an ever expanding mass of Grey Goo by now; b) at first the monolythic massiveness of every single chapter was a cause for celebration, but now it's a problem since 95% of these enormous chapters are taken over by smut with the whole gamer aspect thrown into the bin; c) story is moving at glacial pace, the week long pre-Riser training arc takes up 1/3 of the novel right now, d) I think MC became retarded from overindulging in sех. He keeps getting complacent, gets smacked around with a fat hairy reality check, cries about it, gets bailed out by plot armor, forgets about everything that happened and doesn't ever learn his lesson - then this exact scenario repeats ad infinitum ad nauseam.

NotYourCat
NotYourCatLv11

thank you for your warning,

ilove_milfandloli
ilove_milfandloliLv4

thanks man you save my life

Fuck_Webnovel
Fuck_WebnovelLv4

this is why I don't watch the news because today its some new genre and what's its flag

Diabolic_eternal1
Diabolic_eternal1Lv3

thanks for the review. you saved my psyche.

RuberDF
RuberDFLv5

Man, I'm so glad I dropped this before that part.

Dark_Magma
Dark_MagmaLv4

welp luckily i didnt even read it and forgot it till now. thx for saving my life as i shall not read this thing. have a nice day kind sir.

Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

UPD2: now he's deadass transforming his girls into futas, makes them bang each other as he watches, then gleefully jams it into the sloppy, nutty, frehly used сum cavern after they are done. Yep, I'm out. Peace.

OrdealOfMc
OrdealOfMcLv5

can you tell me which chapter that happens, ive read almost halway through, but I dont want to experience that, and I also dont want to drop the novel.

Djabilong:UPD2: now he's deadass transforming his girls into futas, makes them bang each other as he watches, then gleefully jams it into the sloppy, nutty, frehly used сum cavern after they are done. Yep, I'm out. Peace.
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Djabilong
DjabilongLv6

You have surprising amount of faith in me if you think I remember the exact chapter after dropping the story about a month ago. Spitballing this a bit, but it should be somewhere around ch.35~40 or something along those lines.

OrdealOfMc:can you tell me which chapter that happens, ive read almost halway through, but I dont want to experience that, and I also dont want to drop the novel.
OrdealOfMc
OrdealOfMcLv5

thanks still. have a cookie

LawWillOblivionK
LawWillOblivionKLv13

Thank you for the warning I found it after reading some chapters. But You have my gratitude

Aurafyre
AurafyreLv13

It doesn't.

OrdealOfMc:can you tell me which chapter that happens, ive read almost halway through, but I dont want to experience that, and I also dont want to drop the novel.
RuberDF
RuberDFLv5

Is there an actual option to blacklist stories?

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_Miyasaka
_MiyasakaLv14

Drojam has a 'blacklisted' reading list

RuberDF:Is there an actual option to blacklist stories?
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