I am speechless! I have much to say, but I summarize it to say, this author deserves an award... I have read the synopsis of one of her book and I got hooked and couldn't Free myself. Here, I am again, with this author a kind of painting my real life.. Chai! There is God.. Author, stop stealing and making my heartbeat stand still. I love every fabrics of this authors writing, the structural development, the quality of writing, the background, story development and whatever you could think is excellently excellent. This author is an affection robber, who wants to steal my interest, but I am available to be stolen, I will read your books, recommend it to friends and specially read it out to my wife chapter to chapter, because we've had experiences and we are glad that our love is better, because we are wider and stronger despite all... I recommend this amazing master piece. This author deserve nothing less than 5 stars. Kudos to the author..this was a Christmas gift to me and my family. Previewed: Author Pattyegah Ikwue.

The author is quite had a good grasp on the story. Nice description of what is currently happening and I enjoyed reading! Best of luck author for the success of your novel! Have a good day!

The plotline of the story of interesting. There were a few errors that need tweaking. At first, I wasn't sure who the protagonist was, but as I went on I got a clear understanding. All in all, the external conflict of the story had me continuing to the next chapter. I'm sure when it's polished, it'll be an amazing novel. 👍Keep up the good work, though

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The story is definitely interesting, I enjoyed reading it. A few minor no big deal errors but its easily overlooked since the story is really interesting. continue the great work !

The first thing I notice when reading this Novel, is that the first few chapters of the story introduce a lot of characters at once, which was a little overwhelming at the moment, but slowly you start to get who is who from the abundance of dialogue. The characters do need some development with descriptions, but other than that, fun to imagine what they look like! Same goes for the background of the scenario, more describing but has a general idea on where the story is taking place. The grammar in this story and the overall structure needs some work, but the Author does have a compelling hook that draws the reader into a festive atmosphere. It looks like the Author has a reasonable amount of dialogue between the characters. Dialogue is important to a story and this book has it down! I encourage the Author to practice editing the chapters before releasing them to lessen grammatical errors and possibly filling the chapters a bit more with description. Other than that, I wish them luck with future chaps and votes!

Kind of a nice indulging Plot, I would say the writer should change the book cover and use a attractive one. Overall- it's just a suggestion, attention is all we need.[img=update]

I like how Anthony is being tortured by his desires towards Alayna's body..it is kind of refreshing to get into a perspective of a man in-love. It's very interesting book.

A very interesting and well written story, with well developed characters. This story is a must read and is a good job author. Keep writing and keep up the good work?

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