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Review Detail of Aeternabilis in Shinobi Prince (Naruto FanFic)

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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv133yrAeternabilis

Not trying to be harsh but I am honestly surprised that every review is 5 star? I mean if you like happy go lucky stories I guess that it is a decent story. From reading this story, personally, I would not recommend it as something to get invested in. Maybe if you have nothing to do and like the type of stories I mentioned above. The mc is a naive child (meant to have been an ***** in past life) who is a fanboy of kohona. It is honestly a waste of a good idea for a story. I mean when I went to read this story and from the title plus synopsis, I thought that this story would be about the prince of fire country. So I thought he would grow up as the prince, he knows and has chakra so obviously, he will train that. I thought that he would as a prince get personalised trainers, maybe the king might have a secret legacy that is in the family passed down. Hell, maybe the mc would be a master swordsman and not use chakra but something else. All things where he grows up in the capital to eventually take up being the daiyamo? Instead, much to my disappointment, we follow the mc, while a genius in chakra is very childish/stupid. This would be fine if he wasn't a reincarnation who was previously an *****. I wouldn't even mind if he was just a little childish from being young and it affecting his mind. But he is just way over the top if that makes sense? If this wasn't bad enough he is an utter fanboy of naruto/kohona. He wants to become a shinobi, a child soldier, calls the Hokage jijy, playing around with all the clan's children etc. He doesn't seem to care about any dangers and will give up being a prince just to become a shinobi and much much more. I mean I came to read this story because I was expecting the mc to be a prince of fire country as I haven't read a naruto story about this and found it interesting. Not the same old boring asf naruto story. I'm just rly disappointed because I felt this story had potential and was going to be something different, something new. Hope this helped if you want to read or not. Also, hope that the author can take on what I have written and gl to them. It seems I expected something that wasn't here and was instead just a happy go lucky vibe?

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MythicalOtaku
MythicalOtakuLv11MythicalOtaku

I fully agree

CodeSpectre
CodeSpectreLv4CodeSpectre

Hey that was just a small let down and if u don't like what the MC does why don't u go and write ur own book !!1

Gingai
GingaiLv3Gingai

thanks for the heads up man... dodged a bullet there

Choice_Username
Choice_UsernameLv2Choice_Username

Because he wants to read a fanfiction and not write one

CodeSpectre:Hey that was just a small let down and if u don't like what the MC does why don't u go and write ur own book !!1
CodeSpectre
CodeSpectreLv4CodeSpectre

I understand but he went a bit too far tho

Choice_Username:Because he wants to read a fanfiction and not write one
scias85
scias85Lv7scias85

...that's dissapointing...thanks for the heads up.

Surcres
SurcresLv5Surcres

Are any of the things he said a lie?

CodeSpectre:Hey that was just a small let down and if u don't like what the MC does why don't u go and write ur own book !!1
DaoistZextQE
DaoistZextQELv2DaoistZextQE

nope if anything he could've pointed out a few more points.

Surcres:Are any of the things he said a lie?
Flaashii
FlaashiiLv13Flaashii

why don't you go make a movie, when you watch a movie and you don't like it and tell other people that it was a bad movie? (>‿◠)✌ Thanks to his review I know not to read this story because all the things he typed in are things I absolutely don't like.

CodeSpectre:Hey that was just a small let down and if u don't like what the MC does why don't u go and write ur own book !!1
NoHaremSectLeader
NoHaremSectLeaderLv10NoHaremSectLeader

he said his opinion, not his fault you took it seriously

CodeSpectre:I understand but he went a bit too far tho
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

bro..do shut up. he is literally helping readers by telling whats wrong so that readers that hate it avoid it, and in turn writers faces less actual hate. also...u hypocrite

CodeSpectre:Hey that was just a small let down and if u don't like what the MC does why don't u go and write ur own book !!1
sogeking
sogekingLv4sogeking

lmao

amaturewriter:bro..do shut up. he is literally helping readers by telling whats wrong so that readers that hate it avoid it, and in turn writers faces less actual hate. also...u hypocrite
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Nymos_lvl9000
Nymos_lvl9000Lv3Nymos_lvl9000

thank you brother you saved my neurons