If you like me read till here then you know that the author loves to forget even his own plot points and everything in between even other things and I think he even forgot the NFS game? idk

Yeah, I am out too got too stupid too fast for me like him even knowing it is the pjo world but still blabbering about everything to a goddess he does not even know, could not even read the chapter to the end so bad it got for me -.-

what ways rofl ...

So if I am understanding the last part right his girls like pandora is going to get pregnant from another man ? If so I am out .

It is a good fic but you need to check the grammar because right now it reads like you just translated it and didn't think to check it.

What's with the Corvinal and such and spells classes and not charm class are u translating this?

don't know man I like your other fic with Harry Potter but this ... I hate to read about weak to strong characters that need a long time to get strong, I hate the whole drama it brings, I read too many of such fics, and don't like them anymore, almost every other fic is a weak to strong fic <.< in my opinion. And this fic seems like it will be a long time before he really becomes strong enough and even then it will have characters that just one-shot him I am sure.

what poor guy stop making snape into a good guy that guy is the reason everything happened, hate snape.

Lost interest in this fic it reads more Like a Chinese fic and I hate those

I just find it dumb hat he revealed The magical World to a Woman he knows barely 1 month like are u sure he was 18 years old in hic previous live ? And he knows the Harry Potter world so he should have known about the statue of secret or something

That's something that Sirius and such came up with it should not be public I think?

Can‘t read this anymore without the quotation marks never could read a fic without them and sometimes authors use the ‘ thinking’ and not the “speech” marks and even that is throwing me out and here there is nothing 🙄

I really hope the love interest is Mei Mei :D

I am still reading it, it just was a little bit concerning that the other characters who are really intelligent did not connect anything with that. And I still do no like the whole Ragnarok thing :D

what's with the IQ of your other characters there is Yuki Corp and Yuki Haku and then Yuki CEO but no one asks why they have the same name or so or why Maya does not make the connection because of the ice or something like that.

Man I thought Maya would have been a waifu xD after all the plot from the time travel, I thought she would have been able to recognize him and get more interested.

Yeah, I thought I give it a chance but I am dropping it here just not my type of story, I do not like idiot MCs and this is one of the highest order.

Not gonna lie, I always find it cheap to just get the boosted gear like they can't get stronger with there own power and need some sacred gear to get stronger. If he was human it would have been another thing but a pureblood devil needing a sacred gear... Low

Wow boosted gear how original.... poor issei's family never going to know what happened to Issei being killed just like that. I give it a few chapters before it becomes too bad and I quit this fic lets see.

for me that's not freedom, freedom is for me to do whatever I want without caring about the consequences after all if I can't save whoever I want or kill whoever I want then that means I am not free to choose to do whatever I want, I would not care one bit about fate or something else. Him not saving Ben Parker but later feeling regret or something like that means he is not free, if he was free he would have done whatever he wanted without questioning himself.