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Blood_Rock
Blood_RockLv103yr
2020-12-30 17:42

Had a stroke trying to read this It would probably be good if the writing was edited The idea overall is really good and I would look forward to this series if it got someone to edit it

Military System god realm revolution

sukinovski
4.0
401 Chs

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InHisName
InHisNameLv6

I didn't think it would be that bad. I admit, I was wrong. It was worse! Now my eyes are bleeding.

3yr
27
Apocalypse_2ndLife
Apocalypse_2ndLifeLv3

REALLY good idea but can't read long Coz of no editing

3yr
8
Dertonel
DertonelLv13

is it really THAT bad? i didn't really notice anything, i'm probably blind or something.

3yr
3
AshtynKC
AshtynKCLv14

you have a big brain and fixing Words in your head

Dertonel:is it really THAT bad? i didn't really notice anything, i'm probably blind or something.
3yr
6
AshtynKC
AshtynKCLv14

You have big brain In fixing words in your head

Dertonel:is it really THAT bad? i didn't really notice anything, i'm probably blind or something.
3yr
1
Spinvic
SpinvicLv12

After reading mtls after a while you can understand even the toughest of sentences this is nothing

3yr
8
Silencer5EMR3
Silencer5EMR3Lv10

Enlighten me senior, recommend same novel as this. Except for Mechanical God Emperor and Legendary Mech Army. I'm reading both of them. Another list will gladly be welcomed.

Spinvic:After reading mtls after a while you can understand even the toughest of sentences this is nothing
3yr
6
Michael_J_Williams
Michael_J_WilliamsLv13

🤣🤣that was funny than a mf

3yr
2
Sinful_Anarchy
Sinful_AnarchyLv13

The OG said he had a stroke reading this🤣🤣🤣🤣

2yr
Lostbookworm
LostbookwormLv4

2yr
Zachary_Comodore
Zachary_ComodoreLv13

❤️❤️❤️👍

1yr
Other Reviews
InHisName
InHisNameLv6

Extremely - EXTREMELY - difficult to read! It took immense effort just to decipher the sentences. I had hoped the story would improve over time, but it unfortunately didn't. The first chapter was hideous, the second showed improvement, but then after the third, quality dipped to all-time-low again. Let's forget about writing quality for a moment and address the elephant in the room: story development and character design. The protagonist so far has 0 (yes zero!) personality. We don't know anything about him apart from the one tiny little detail that he's a transmigrator from our Earth. You would think after this abysmal display of character design things can't possibly get any worse! But no! Somehow it does. The protagonist in a display of absolute genius decides to reform the government to not only have a constitution, but a constitution which directly limits the Emperor's (the MCs) power. Transforming the absolute monarchy into, you guessed it, a constitutional monarchy. This author is clearly either completely ignorant about historical social evolution, or worse...a liberal snowflake.

3yr

sukinovski
sukinovskiAuthor

Thanks to everyone who came to read this story. The novel has more than 200 episodes today. It is popular in Thailand. Please be assured that this novel will have enough episodes.

3yr
ThatOneGUy
ThatOneGUyLv13

Subpar translation with no effort to the point of being an MTL with little to no editing, author refuses to show the raw hes translating for this title, and now is demanding currency to unlock chapters when it's clear hes just scumming off of someone else's work unlicensed and is a profiteer asking for money for it fan translation with no connection here to whose work he is plagiarizing off of, simply unacceptable so save your coins and boycott this title as the translations trash anyways..

3yr
synncrytech3
synncrytech3Lv5

Good novel about modern weapons in a cultivation world. What if you could have a conventional empire, in a cultivation world with no concept of technology? If you like these things then you will like reading this novel. ............................................................................................................................................

3yr
YoDaddy
YoDaddyLv4

Hey author, do you need an editor? I like this novel and would like for more people to read it, I would be glad to help, for free of course.

3yr
kunanon_karupong
kunanon_karupongLv1

I think this novel is very interesting. Including the design of characters, languages and interesting plotlines Anyone who likes Eastern Fantasi must read this story.

3yr
Yue_021
Yue_021Lv14

What's with the low reviews? I understand most of them but for me this is one good of a story. It fits my preferences perfectly, starting from the genres, pacing, and up to the development of the story. I've been looking for novels similar to Release that Witch, World Development System, and King of Technology, and this novel is very similar to those in some aspect.

3yr
Tarhanis
TarhanisLv5

Traduction must be done with google trad... It's just hard to decipher the meaning. With some efforts, and an author with brain, this novel could be enjoyable if you didn't have to read twice the same sentence to (partly) understand something.

3yr
Dark_Scholars
Dark_ScholarsLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
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