Blood_Rock

Peak Character development made sense and was evenly paced with great flavor text to digest it. Character perspectives were excellently used to enhance the story rather than boring info dumps World building was evenly paced and made sense both in the original content and the fan fic universe Only gripe would be that some of the villain characters weren't explored as much but overall did not affect enjoyment of the story

He turns blind and the entire plot just stops dead. The story at this point feels like the author is just padding. Important plot points are dropped, character progression takes a nose dive. And the whole clan thing with his fiance just made no sense. I skimmed through another 40 chapters and it's just bleh. How is this rated above 3 stars?

Xp

Had a stroke trying to read this It would probably be good if the writing was edited The idea overall is really good and I would look forward to this series if it got someone to edit it

Had to slog through 80 chapters of the character going through his development to end up not developing at all... its like you could cram 60 chapters into about 7-9 and still end up with as much character development for the main character..

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