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2021-04-05 15:23

I have three main issues with this novel. First of all, the group chat. It's the main focus for most of the novel, but it isn't very well implemented, and the plot would be much better if it was omitted entirely. On a similar note, the MC's goal is very unappealing. Just a generic, I want myself and everyone I know to be happy. It's fairly unique for this genre, but it makes for a remarkably boring read. Finally, the pairing. Sasuke's relationship with Sakura is boring. Just walking around going on dates, as Sasuke demonstrates his superiority, and Sakura cries about her insecurities. It's not great.

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