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uflesh940
uflesh940Lv33yr
2021-04-05 23:23

I have three main issues with this novel. First of all, the group chat. It's the main focus for most of the novel, but it isn't very well implemented, and the plot would be much better if it was omitted entirely. On a similar note, the MC's goal is very unappealing. Just a generic, I want myself and everyone I know to be happy. It's fairly unique for this genre, but it makes for a remarkably boring read. Finally, the pairing. Sasuke's relationship with Sakura is boring. Just walking around going on dates, as Sasuke demonstrates his superiority, and Sakura cries about her insecurities. It's not great.

I Am Sasuke

SovereignKlord
3.3
76 Chs

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Mr_No_One
Mr_No_OneLv4

Imma be honest here, i find it sasuke acting like a good gentleman.... It just doesn't fit for me, and honestly, making him become sakura's boyfriend. Just absolute garbage. Now i dont like to hate, and im not saying your story is garbage, im just saying, that this kind of fan fic doesn't fit with me. I mean, amny others may like the idea, but for me, i don't...sorry if this makes you want to quit writing, but i say u shouldn't, like i said, im not one to hate, im just saying this story could have been much better, but, u do u, if u keep going, one day for sure, u will be able to accomplish something.

4yr

Grayfia_4_Life
Grayfia_4_LifeLv6

if the character is not sasuke is ok, because he is master of the edge lord.. if the character is not sasuke is ok, because he is master of the edge lord..

4yr
NahinS77
NahinS77Lv2

Could have been much better ☹️🙁😕☹️😕☹️😟☹️🥺☹️😳☹️😟☹️😟☹️😕☹️☹️😕☹️😟☹️🥺☹️😕☹️🙁☹️☹️😟☹️😕☹️🙁☹️😕☹️😟☹️☹️🥺☹️😟☹️🙁☹️😕☹️😟☹️😟☹️😕☹️🙁☹️☹️😕😟☹️😟☹️😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞😞

4yr
scoots
scootsLv3

I absolutely love this novel from the harem aspect (although I’d like it toned down a few notches and not get every girl that is beautiful) the rights although fast are nice, and the chat and multi world system with quests and the ability to give powers to it so others can buy which make its awesome

4yr
Varo_Rojas
Varo_RojasLv1

Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

4yr
Hashirama015
Hashirama015Lv4

Not my cup of tea Mc is too nice.... Friendship power type Mc....mjjuu66ujjhh6666666666666u777788888878888888989999996655555 333333333333 333444444444444444444454444333

3yr
Baby421
Baby421Lv4

This story is way too cringe 😬 and it definitely not suitable concept for sasuke character because talk about an edgy lord suddenly turning very good, kind and friendly😳. First of all that's Sus as F. second of all it doesn't seems right. Long story short : way too cringe.

2yr
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3yr
Daoist721221
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