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rRandomAuthor4yr
2020-11-28 02:24

Hi All, Author here. Thank you for taking the time to read and review this novel. I plan on supporting this novel to completion, and I hope you enjoy reading this novel as much as I am having writing it. Thanks, On a side note, shout out to my friend Miko for editing this novel and adding awesome ideas.

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Nikhil_ChandLv4

is this harem?

rRandomAuthor

No.

Nikhil_Chand:is this harem?
Jeremy_KramerLv5

Is there a singular love interest?

rRandom:No.
rRandomAuthor

Maybe...I cant spoil things like that yet :)

Jeremy_Kramer:Is there a singular love interest?
Matt_pikeLv5

But i need to know if there will eventually be a love female love interest. i dont need to know when i only need to know eventually he will have a waifu.

rRandom:Maybe...I cant spoil things like that yet :)
rRandomAuthor

There will be

Matt_pike:But i need to know if there will eventually be a love female love interest. i dont need to know when i only need to know eventually he will have a waifu.
Matt_pikeLv5

rRandom:There will be
Nana1960Lv2

Author hopefully you are good enough to pull up some complexe love triangles/rivals etc. with interesting plots mixed in.

_ReAdEr_Lv3

Love triangle?!?😨😨 No harem thanks and we don't want the story to be focused on romance.

Nana1960:Author hopefully you are good enough to pull up some complexe love triangles/rivals etc. with interesting plots mixed in.
Nana1960Lv2

Love triangle isn't harem. Haven't you seen the vampire diaries, the battle of Troy? the story of the 3 kingdoms? as much as you may hate it. Love/feelings make the world go round not logic. We are not logical creatures. Just look at the Tudors and England with Anne Boolean.

_ReAdEr_:Love triangle?!?😨😨 No harem thanks and we don't want the story to be focused on romance.
Man_of_culture_69Lv2

Oh f**l... You really spend much time explaining yourself!

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MaouMaferLv2

you troll ?

Nana1960:Author hopefully you are good enough to pull up some complexe love triangles/rivals etc. with interesting plots mixed in.
draculemorningstarLv4

I despise love triangles,this isn't a bloody ya novel,author hope you keep it to a single love interest without drama

UndeadBeingLv12

judging by your synopsis this sounds alot like a different novel which i am extremely mad about wasting my coins... it took him 100 chapters of stabilizing his cultivation with no progress

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rRandomAuthor

By chapter 60 he's already bodying those his age. Don't worry, the first 20-30 chapters is establishing the plot/his powers, then its all uphill from there, with chapter 65ish really kicking things off and him even fighting above his cultivation (and winning ;) )

UndeadBeing:judging by your synopsis this sounds alot like a different novel which i am extremely mad about wasting my coins... it took him 100 chapters of stabilizing his cultivation with no progress
UndeadBeingLv12

man it's so alike I'm having flashbacks, all that money.

rRandom:By chapter 60 he's already bodying those his age. Don't worry, the first 20-30 chapters is establishing the plot/his powers, then its all uphill from there, with chapter 65ish really kicking things off and him even fighting above his cultivation (and winning ;) )
rRandomAuthor

How is it alike? He doesnt spend 100 chapters stabilizing anything???

UndeadBeing:man it's so alike I'm having flashbacks, all that money.
UndeadBeingLv12

Man finds magical item that allows him to cultivate, starts cultivating and takes revenge on his bullies, goes against heaven, if you can't tell im still mad

rRandom:How is it alike? He doesnt spend 100 chapters stabilizing anything???
rRandomAuthor

Well, theres nothing I can do for you about that novel, or your money, unfortunately

UndeadBeing:Man finds magical item that allows him to cultivate, starts cultivating and takes revenge on his bullies, goes against heaven, if you can't tell im still mad
UndeadBeingLv12

yes I figured, I have come to peace that they scammed me.

rRandom:Well, theres nothing I can do for you about that novel, or your money, unfortunately
Other Reviews
rRandomAuthor

Hi All, Author Here. First off to my current readers, thank you for everyone who has read and continues to read my novel. I truly appreciate it, and will continue to support this novel until its eventual conclusion. I think John's journey so far has been incredibly interesting thus far, and hopefully what I have in store in the future continues to interest all readers. After a year and a half of writing this novel, I figured I'd write another review addressing comments/complaints that are commonly brought up. To put this at the top for all to see, I personally believe that while this novel is good throughout, it really kicks off and goes from "good" to "great," or even "fantastic" at around chapter 70. The novel if free to read up to chapter 90, and if you make it that far, I believe most readers will come to love the novel by that point. Now, to address common comments/complaints for this novel: 1) John being too naive or "dumb" - This comment is mostly brought up in the beginning of the novel, and these comments typically disappear by around chapter 90 or so. One thing to remember regarding John's smarts is that he starts out as a sheltered 14 year old child. He's never really been out in the world, and as such makes wrong decisions, and sometimes even dumb ones from the readers perspective. This is done for two reasons: one is to write a realistic MC, as a child who is smart without flaws from the start is not very realistic. The second reason is to show growth of the character in a way that the reader connects with. With the many decisions John makes that is seen as "dumb" or "stupid," he learns from those decisions and does not make them again. I would say by around chapter 90, John is almost a different character due to his personal and mental growth, and he continues to grow smarter as the novel progresses. 2) John not being ruthless enough or too nice: This comment is also brought up early on as well. John does make some naive decisions again, many that are too nice. But yet again, he learns from those decisions (ie. the village arc) that fuels his growth to becoming more ruthless, as well as colder to those not directly associated with him. Once again, the plot points make his ruthless personality shift believable, and by the current point in the novel, John is incredibly ruthless to his enemies, even to the point that others are shocked by his actions. He will continue to get more ruthless as the novel progresses, on his way to becoming "Asura" Those are the two main complaints early on in the novel, which tend to vanish as readers progress through the story, while John develops into the MC that readers of this genre like (Smart, ruthless, strong). I hope this update is useful for any new readers thinking of picking up this novel. Thanks for reading and supporting the novel. -rRandom

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