Item: MHA:OMNITRIX
Rating: 4
Author: Lance_grim

Lance_grimLv54yr

2021-01-28 05:37

it is a very good story i did not like the first few chapters but after he gets the omnitrix it gets much better [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

MHA:OMNITRIX

Boboiboyfan01

3.7

37 Chs

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Imperial_FoxLv5

Completely butchered the concept. MC is overtly dramatic, edgy and emo. much like Sasuke, but even worse, he doesn't use his brain in right matters, if he used his mind correctly, he could have easily lived without much drama. Author just wanted to create too much drama and edginess, really, even the grammar, writing style are bad. no world background given, just involved Ben 10 characters out of nowhere. a completely wasted Ben 10 story

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yokedjaguarLv14

God you can't write a single sentence right. Are you using a translator or is this you cause my God is it bad, the character isn't that compelling either he's more annoying than anything. Thanks for ruining another omnitrix story for me, it seems that no one can actually make a decent one except a handful of people.

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Rysiarth_mundusDeoLv11

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mysticalnapsLv5

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GRAVITYLv5

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Daoist538275Lv1

GOOD. Great fan fiction, interesting gg, good character disclosure. Good luck and update the fanfic soon. how soon will the chapter be out?[img=recommend][img=update][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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antonio_montenegroLv3

very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora) very good, one of the best stories that put the omnitrix, Se contradice un poco pero, esta bien está bien (traductora)

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LuzivarLv4

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Sword_ProLv4

I will not write a lot of sentences. I'll just say that this is good fanfiction and i enjoy it a lot. Author, please continue, you're doing great.

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