Imperial_Fox

Nice

iIfeel like I've read this story a couple years back, are you copying or uts a translation?

You take the story forward very slowly. Keeping MC stuck, and in turn the readers. In the starting chapters, there's nothing present to hook the readers in by anything, MC just keeps being a pussy and a Wimp in front of his boss, even after having potentially world changing powers. he just keeps plotting without taking action. this leaves a bad taste in the mouth of most readers who want instant gratification of revenge or MCs development. most readers won't even read past the first few chapters due to it. and even if they do, your MC's character and thinking is way too one dimensional. as such, you leave little room for character development.

pretty mid writing tbh

All the inner monologuing is just boring, and very predictable. the air of mystery you wanna create isn't forming.

You think it's cool, but it ain't, it's just plain confusing

Thanks, I'll be dropping this now.

Hasn't broke the fourth wall even once yet

Keeps getting more confusing and worse...