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Nice, Just keep up the good work, it is a good story'
It is a Good Martial Peak Fan fiction. Although a bit confusing at first, after a few chapters, the story becomes interesting. It's a good read. Recommend 8/10
This is a very nice and well thought fan fiction, writing is good, and the pacing is good too. keep up the good work bud.
lore accurate slowbro
at the end, it's always about who has the bigger stick
bad bargain for Franklin
Different POVs are too repetitive of same thing and annoying, it would do good to keep them few instead every chapter
What the fuck... if he follows through, this ff is dead (it's already dead)