author has a good command of language, a few grammatical errors but of course it is a new novel and will be edited. An interesting plot of cultivation that has a lot of potential to become one of the greatest on this site. the characters, and their backgrounds are well thought out, and definitely will keep a reader intrigued. best of luck to the author, keep writingđ¤
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