When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.
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te voy a responder a este , la zona fue afectada por un meteorito y una bestia de un nivel alto , las bestias no se acercarian
tell me you don't read at all without telling me you don't read all all.
yeah he probably got through 1 chapter and said "time to write an incorrect review!"
Tsol_3785:tell me you don't read at all without telling me you don't read all all.
Sir how is his review incorrect
UndeadBeing:yeah he probably got through 1 chapter and said "time to write an incorrect review!"
Most of his points had been removed, chickie nuggies was said to be because his soul was still transferring causing him to become childlike. His soul finally finished transferring and he stopped acting like that. His next point is absolutely incorrect since if he had read further he would know the area was highly radioactive, they wouldn't get close to that without dying, considering a team and some cultivators already died trying to explore. Not only does the story explain itself, he didn't even stick around for 5 extra chapters for everything being explained... I'm not trying to insist that his views are incorrect but they fix themselves with actual logic just a few chapters after where he stopped.
Dodongchuy:Sir how is his review incorrect
I read further, but it just didn't get better. The backtracked explanations were even more unbelievable than the original plot holes.
UndeadBeing:Most of his points had been removed, chickie nuggies was said to be because his soul was still transferring causing him to become childlike. His soul finally finished transferring and he stopped acting like that. His next point is absolutely incorrect since if he had read further he would know the area was highly radioactive, they wouldn't get close to that without dying, considering a team and some cultivators already died trying to explore. Not only does the story explain itself, he didn't even stick around for 5 extra chapters for everything being explained... I'm not trying to insist that his views are incorrect but they fix themselves with actual logic just a few chapters after where he stopped.
when there's a 10km radius explosion the first thing you do is investigating the worm besides it
