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Eliza993
Eliza993Lv43yr
2021-03-29 19:51

Overall, I do love the story. In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so. System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards. I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.

Rise Of The Worm Sovereign

Grand_Void_Daoist
4.5
1097 Chs

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Shamir_Rimal
Shamir_RimalLv11

Romance?

3yr
3
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

he's a worm...

Shamir_Rimal:Romance?
3yr
59
TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

Don't the women like long worms and snakes going places? 🤣

UndeadBeing:he's a worm...
3yr
25
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

I mean I have searched and I can say i have not seen that, yet

TrevorTNT:Don't the women like long worms and snakes going places? 🤣
3yr
12
R34P3R
R34P3RLv11

Ive seen roAches man anything can happen

UndeadBeing:I mean I have searched and I can say i have not seen that, yet
3yr
7
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Ight guess I gotta widen my searches thank you, take this meme for the road

R34P3R:Ive seen roAches man anything can happen
3yr
19
Muzaru
MuzaruLv14

Can you send more memes🤧

UndeadBeing:Ight guess I gotta widen my searches thank you, take this meme for the road
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3yr
4
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Muzaru:Can you send more memes🤧
3yr
24
Blaze_Style
Blaze_StyleLv15

UndeadBeing:
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3yr
9
Fahrenx
FahrenxLv14

im dead 😂🤣🤣😅

UndeadBeing:he's a worm...
2yr
7
Netflix_Gamer
Netflix_GamerLv14

unfortunately ur not wrong

UndeadBeing:Ight guess I gotta widen my searches thank you, take this meme for the road
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2yr
5
noxity
noxityLv1

oh I've seen a snake, and a frog go up there...

UndeadBeing:I mean I have searched and I can say i have not seen that, yet
2yr
4
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Hope my snake doesn’t get any ideas😰

noxity:oh I've seen a snake, and a frog go up there...
2yr
4
False_Apostle
False_ApostleLv2

Just found that funny “weirdly dumb”

2yr
3
Alibi_Lullaby
Alibi_LullabyLv4

I'm dying..... his shouldn't be that funny

UndeadBeing:he's a worm...
2yr
4
Racist_Tobirama
Racist_TobiramaLv4

2yr
2
Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

Honestly i hate reading dumb MCs. I hate the excuse of ”Well if you read further it gets better” Cause normally it never gets better and if its does its only by a tiny margin. Early chapters are suppose to grab my attention and make me want to continue reading but stupid/idiotic/dumb MCs instead just make me drop the story faster.

2yr
8
ShadyDemoness
ShadyDemonessLv15

I think he meant that there's a plot reason for the mc being dumb the early chapters

Crimson_King:Honestly i hate reading dumb MCs. I hate the excuse of ”Well if you read further it gets better” Cause normally it never gets better and if its does its only by a tiny margin. Early chapters are suppose to grab my attention and make me want to continue reading but stupid/idiotic/dumb MCs instead just make me drop the story faster.
1yr
3
Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

I dont really care if theres a perfectly good reason for it. Regardless it sucks to read stupid MCs

ShadyDemoness:I think he meant that there's a plot reason for the mc being dumb the early chapters
1yr
2
ShadyDemoness
ShadyDemonessLv15

I get that. But if it's only for the first few chapters because of some kind of damage from reincarnation i don't really care.

Crimson_King:I dont really care if theres a perfectly good reason for it. Regardless it sucks to read stupid MCs
1yr
2
Other Reviews
Vincent_Velasquez
Vincent_VelasquezLv2

The main character is interesting to watch develop, grow, and get stronger. There are some things I didn't expect to happen in this book that happened in a good way that I didn't anticipate! Trust me when I say there is a plot twist will make you think "oh that makes sense now that I think about it". I just hope that worm boy's form gets a bit more visually appealing. (I just want him to get a neat pattern or something) Thanks for the great book author! (/^▽^)/

3yr

Poet_Legion
Poet_LegionLv15

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Wanga
WangaLv13

When I read a novel, I like to become engrossed in the story and immersed in it, the constant use of "chickie nuggies" in the beginning completely destroys the immersion for me. It is overused to the point of becoming annoying. Another issue is that the world seems completely static without the MC. I.e First encounter of a boar & cultivator. They had been dead for days, but no predator in a spirit beast forest approached for a free meal. Only a mouse appeared when the MC arrived. The second encounter caused a large explosion which uprooted trees and either killed everything within 10km radius or caused it to flee out of range, when he is only 20km from a large city hosting 6 million people of which 30% are cultivators. Yet no one finds this strange and comes to investigate what happened... Not even during the 7 days in which the MC passes out beside the crater. An explosion of that magnitude would easily be heard by every person within 50km. The concept seems interesting and the writing quality is not terrible, but it feels like an insane mode test of willpower to make it past the first 20 chapters to see if things start to get better.

3yr
Roon_Toon1
Roon_Toon1Lv14

Author is the mc gonna get a harem because that seems EXTREMELY STUPID

4yr
MasterSama
MasterSamaLv12

The sytem is dumb. it gives stUpid rewards. the mc is retarted and is saying dumb shit constantLy its a baD book honestly. I read lIke 20 chapters and dropped it.

3yr
XXXXC
XXXXCLv3

Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended

4yr
Once_Upon_A_Time
Once_Upon_A_TimeLv4

Very captivating and interesting, not much plot holes at all. Still hungrily waiting for more chapters. Thank you author, for writing a non-human MC novel.

3yr
Fivefive
FivefiveLv2

So far, I've really enjoyed the story. The one thing I wish people wouldn't do is post comments like "omg mc so returded" or "why dont you try dis!!1!1!!!". It's really annoying considering that while the MC is kinda dumb, compared to this generation now, I swear he's a prodigious genius.

3yr
RAGNAROK_Ravella
RAGNAROK_RavellaLv13

the story is mostly fine. There's just one thing that I hate about the MC, He says chickie buggies a lot... I hate it. I feel like I'm losing my brain cells just by hovering my eyes over it. Although the story explains the reason behind this, I don't like it one bit

3yr
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