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2022-08-24 05:16

(Review at 20 chapters) Writing Quality - Pretty good. Update Stability - Meh Story Development - Story is extremely confusing, one time MC is a zombie and another time he is not a zombie and is trying to fight and beat the virus please make up your mind author?? Character Design - MC is stupid for no reason i am starting to think author made him stupid on purpose World Background - not much is mentioned about this within 20 chapters besides zombie outbreak overall: pretty good story with a stupid MC (hopefully his IQ improves) am i going to keep reading ?? Absolutely because i have nothing to read atm so i might as well burn my brain cells and be a monkey for the rest of the 200+ chapters (funny even if i have 0 brain cells i am still smarter then MC kek)

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DaisukiDayoSenpai
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Thanks for the review and you came in a pretty good time. Actually I dropped updating this novel because I was busy with a couple of things but I'm slowly building it up. There's only like four or five chapters left before it ends. Also, this was my first time trying to write a cultivation novel with a system and I kind of messed up a little bit with all the irregular info dumps and whatnot. Also, there were a lot of characters whewss... In any case, it was a fun journey and I'm glad that you're enjoying it at least. I apologize in advance for typos and inconsistent info >_<

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