C17 Please make the MC smarter and more mature, or at least polite. I know he was a bigshot, but its irritating he keep cutting off someone else dialogue. he is exactly a muscle head just like how he describe his first disciple survivor. Other than this only problem, the whole story is very interesting.
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Thank you so much for leaving a review, however, I don't remember him needlessly interrupting someone when they're talking. <minor spoilers ahead o-o> It's true that MC is a bit 'behind the times' and that will be later on explained as yes, being a musclehead. Because all he ever does is cultivate and become stronger, he was left oblivious to other things in life such as romance and stuff. Aside from that, I do believe that MC is polite. If there are times when he interrupted someone with an unnecessary comment of the sort, then please do leave a comment and I will gladly correct it. I'm really thankful for all your responses and as such will respond accordingly. Also, please do note that this is a first-person perspective book. If it doesn't have the symbols " " enclosing it, that means MC is not talking. He is merely thinking about it. It may look like an interruption but if one were to imagine it, they would see that the person talking is uninterrupted while MC ponders about what he or she was saying. Of course, that doesn't mean I didn't have any written mistakes herein the book. I was just a bit shock to know that MC interrupts a dialogue unnecessarily. Because just like you, I also find it unpleasant if someone does that irl as well. If you were referring to the conversation with Yu Sying and Lin Xian, then it was completely understandable since he has no clue as to what the C-thing is all about. If one were not to ask any questions, one wouldn't learn anything that unfolds. Once again, thank you so much for leaving a review! It is really appreciated ^0^
Nah author it was just fine It was just MC being curious and wanting to know the terms which he was oblivious to As a reader I have seen much worst worthless arrogance , tsunders , lolis , cannon folders acting arrogantly beyond comprehension. Ur character was pretty decent well behaved champ compared to some insane characters with personality disorders
DaisukiDayoSenpai:Thank you so much for leaving a review, however, I don't remember him needlessly interrupting someone when they're talking. <minor spoilers ahead o-o> It's true that MC is a bit 'behind the times' and that will be later on explained as yes, being a musclehead. Because all he ever does is cultivate and become stronger, he was left oblivious to other things in life such as romance and stuff. Aside from that, I do believe that MC is polite. If there are times when he interrupted someone with an unnecessary comment of the sort, then please do leave a comment and I will gladly correct it. I'm really thankful for all your responses and as such will respond accordingly. Also, please do note that this is a first-person perspective book. If it doesn't have the symbols " " enclosing it, that means MC is not talking. He is merely thinking about it. It may look like an interruption but if one were to imagine it, they would see that the person talking is uninterrupted while MC ponders about what he or she was saying. Of course, that doesn't mean I didn't have any written mistakes herein the book. I was just a bit shock to know that MC interrupts a dialogue unnecessarily. Because just like you, I also find it unpleasant if someone does that irl as well. If you were referring to the conversation with Yu Sying and Lin Xian, then it was completely understandable since he has no clue as to what the C-thing is all about. If one were not to ask any questions, one wouldn't learn anything that unfolds. Once again, thank you so much for leaving a review! It is really appreciated ^0^
