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2021-06-28 23:24

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spectra_phantom
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If you're interested in the bakugan, someone wrote a fanfic about the bakugan and it made me feel very nostalgic. The fanfic is called "bakugan: rise of the half bakugan", if you have time, I would appreciate it if you could take a look and write your personal opinions in the comments. they are called authors, but their articles do not stand out because there is not much interaction. I'm a writer too, so I'm posting some fanfictions with comments so you can feel better. I am writing this message because I am afraid that if he feels that what he has written is not taken into account, he will leave. If you enjoy this fanfic like me, you will make me very happy if you direct others to this fanfic. Thanks if you've read this far. (and my english is not very good so sorry for the typos.)

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Iam making this review as of May 29 2021 TOTAL CHAPTERS AS OF NOW:25 now..... Writing Quality - 4/5 author tends to suddenly change perspective from 1st PoV to 3rd POV and the quotations that hughlight dialogue can be misplaced aside the negative comments writing quality is 4/5 because in short.....his delivery makes the book engaging and not like how a unpassionate teacher discusses a boring topic so yeah. Story Development - Its just enough, time sskips are present but it is well done similar to other Fan fics to srt the ground for their OCs and the main contrubuting part here is the smut haha. Character Design - its a fan fic the only thing to note of is the author MC and i like it both his actions and thoughts. Other OCs are present but as of chapter 25 it makes it hard to describe other characters (not enough groundwork but still 5/5) Updating stability - authors updates as of noow is 1 chap every 4 day gap so every 5th day. Mind you this is actually pretty good BETTER even. And please if youre reading this pls support the author and dont stress the other authors to update fast. think of it as this the authors are the goose that lays golden eggs. us readers take care of it in exchange for said work (golden eggs) dont butcher mate thats stupid. World background - again people its a fan fic its so consistency to the canon. can be ignored and just enjoy. But objective criticism the world background is actually nice because of a certain twist.🤣🤣 TLDR: GOOD BOOK, ENJOY SOME GRAMMAR ERRORS AND DONT STRESS THE AUTHOT OUT BE CIVIL.

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