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Thereviewer48
Thereviewer48Lv13yrThereviewer48

I am not going to do an in-depth review. But I don't want to be mean here. I could not understand anything I read, so I do not know what to. And English might not be your first language, so I don't want to be harsh if it isn't. But if you are going to write a book in English, it would be good to put your story through grammarly to let it be readable, because right now, it is not. The premise looks promising and could be interesting, but it is hard to tell. Keep going author, I hope I did not discourge you or anything! Please try grammarly!

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Musō-ka

Kylle_Manza

Liked it!

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Kylle_Manza
Kylle_ManzaAuthorKylle_Manza

thanks for your honest review about it and I will work hard to correct my mistakes

Thereviewer48
Thereviewer48Lv1Thereviewer48

*don't know what to say