I am not going to do an in-depth review. But I don't want to be mean here. I could not understand anything I read, so I do not know what to. And English might not be your first language, so I don't want to be harsh if it isn't. But if you are going to write a book in English, it would be good to put your story through grammarly to let it be readable, because right now, it is not. The premise looks promising and could be interesting, but it is hard to tell. Keep going author, I hope I did not discourge you or anything! Please try grammarly!
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