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okay now that i read chapter 1 its really interesting i already add it to my library to continue read it later ok back to the topic the first chapter is great but in my personal opinion the story is so fast but your writing quality is great so keep it up im hoping a great story for you...

thank you there will be more characters in the future so i hope you will keep reading it...

hmmm first of all i hope you guys enjoy my novel and if you guys noticed there's some mistake on it jm bot that good in English i hope you understand it thats it leave a review and enjoy

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thanks for your honest review about it and I will work hard to correct my mistakes