I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.
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You are part of the problem. Rating something five stars while not reading it? and you have the gall to complain about other people on this platform? Disgusting.
you want me to give you a bj? else why you so stressed. chill. have good food, fap, wash and then have a coke.
Nice advice hahahhaha
