I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.

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Shameless request, but whatever. Please don’t turn this into a harem where the mc surprises all the bad guys and wins the hearts of all the maidens. I don’t want to see another story with potential become a harem novel that can only repeat the same thing over and over.

I like the story very much. My problem is that it seems to be extremly similar to Desilate era. While adding the additional cheats to the Mc, the stories seen way too similar.

Ch. 1-13 don't seem to have anything to do with the rest of the story. Has there been some mistake? I'm confused. It's like somebody dropped those chapters in and deleted the originals.

Amazing potential, good grammar, and well thought out!!!! This a superb story I hope you don't drop this because I love this story I hope you make this 1000+ chapters and make many more cultivation realms

even though only 10 chapters released so far. author starts with interesting story line... I look forward to the rest of chapters to be released... Author-san 🙏💯❤️

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The fact that it is an original, and you could still come up with this kind of suspenseful synopsis, makes reading this novel worth the time. Then there's the treasure, 'The Eye of Myriad Universe'. Catchy name, cool synopsis, and a unique cover page. You have my attention. [img=update]