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type12345Lv144yr
2020-11-23 13:03

I like the story very much. My problem is that it seems to be extremly similar to Desilate era. While adding the additional cheats to the Mc, the stories seen way too similar.

The Legend of Min Hong

ORIGIN_ESSENCE
4.7
601 Chs

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ORIGIN_ESSENCE
ORIGIN_ESSENCEAuthor

I'm just trying to give my readers an extremely familiar background for the MC, so it makes the background of the MC easier to understand. but the following chapters are original

4yr
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a_commoner
a_commonerLv5

Does this novel has a system or not, there's system tag, but already 9 chapters and there's no trace of a system.

3yr
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cutelit4ever
cutelit4everLv12

Wow, the way the author delivers his masterpiece is really fascinating. I mean, it is a truly good story, the conversation and the action itself makes you want to read more and more. I like it ♥ Hope to read more from you, author sama.

3yr

buhahaha
buhahahaLv5

I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.

3yr
Boluwatife_julius
Boluwatife_juliusLv1

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Juin
JuinLv2

Shameless request, but whatever. Please don’t turn this into a harem where the mc surprises all the bad guys and wins the hearts of all the maidens. I don’t want to see another story with potential become a harem novel that can only repeat the same thing over and over.

3yr
Chrazi87
Chrazi87Lv15

Ch. 1-13 don't seem to have anything to do with the rest of the story. Has there been some mistake? I'm confused. It's like somebody dropped those chapters in and deleted the originals.

3yr
DaoistCrazy1122
DaoistCrazy1122Lv13

Amazing potential, good grammar, and well thought out!!!! This a superb story I hope you don't drop this because I love this story I hope you make this 1000+ chapters and make many more cultivation realms

4yr
wavy95
wavy95Lv4

even though only 10 chapters released so far. author starts with interesting story line... I look forward to the rest of chapters to be released... Author-san 🙏💯❤️

4yr
Douglas_Lanora
Douglas_LanoraLv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact keraringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
syxhdud
syxhdudLv4

The fact that it is an original, and you could still come up with this kind of suspenseful synopsis, makes reading this novel worth the time. Then there's the treasure, 'The Eye of Myriad Universe'. Catchy name, cool synopsis, and a unique cover page. You have my attention. [img=update]

4yr
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