This is a nice bk, still too short to say anything concrete. But it's unique and interesting, if you like System's then it's probably for you. The only "negative" point that come's to mind, are the "short" chapter's. But the update rate is daily, so it's not a problem. The grammar is okay too, not perfect, but you don't need to read a sentence 10 time's to understand it. But there are mistake's, small one's, but they exist. But not stupid stuff like, he/she/her/him, and if, i didn't see it and it probably was a 1 time thing. Im not gonna talk about the content of bk itself, you should form your own opinion and not get influenced by reviews too much. I think it's self-explanatory what this story is about. I just wish this book had 100 chapter's already, but no, i needed to find this while it had 20 chapter's only...Anyway, i hope the Author doesn't drop this, and good luck!