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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv44yr
2020-12-06 18:03

This is a nice bk, still too short to say anything concrete. But it's unique and interesting, if you like System's then it's probably for you. The only "negative" point that come's to mind, are the "short" chapter's. But the update rate is daily, so it's not a problem. The grammar is okay too, not perfect, but you don't need to read a sentence 10 time's to understand it. But there are mistake's, small one's, but they exist. But not stupid stuff like, he/she/her/him, and if, i didn't see it and it probably was a 1 time thing. Im not gonna talk about the content of bk itself, you should form your own opinion and not get influenced by reviews too much. I think it's self-explanatory what this story is about. I just wish this book had 100 chapter's already, but no, i needed to find this while it had 20 chapter's only...Anyway, i hope the Author doesn't drop this, and good luck!

I am System

Shadow_Magus
4.7
84 Chs

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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

Another thing i think is a little negative, is that the world isn't properly explained, atleast so far. Like what is the power-scaling/ranking, why are the Kingdom's having war? How many Kingdom's exist, when did these God's start blessing people and how did people react. Well, these thing's get probably explained in the future. It's still just 20 chapter's in, but i hope it's explained in the bk itself. Not in the Author's comment, or in the comment's down below.

4yr
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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthor

Thank you. I don't intend on dropping it, but as I stated on my other novels, I will be going out of town, and my exams are starting on 9th Jan, so I will be pausing everything for a while

4yr
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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthor

Ya, so no explanations. Things will unveil themselves in the story. Imagine seeing 12 different anime based in the same world. That will be this novel, with all of these stories interlinked through one main story of Jack. No explainations, but if people ask, then I will give breif explainiations, unless it is important to the plot, at which point I will just say 'No Spoilers'. Sorry for wrong english, I'm tired after writting 3 chapters in one day and my finger jstu commited suidice.

Kokushibou:Another thing i think is a little negative, is that the world isn't properly explained, atleast so far. Like what is the power-scaling/ranking, why are the Kingdom's having war? How many Kingdom's exist, when did these God's start blessing people and how did people react. Well, these thing's get probably explained in the future. It's still just 20 chapter's in, but i hope it's explained in the bk itself. Not in the Author's comment, or in the comment's down below.
4yr
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Kokushibou
KokushibouLv4

Yeah, i know. Just read my comment again, i know that it's probably gonna be explained.

Shadow_Magus:Ya, so no explanations. Things will unveil themselves in the story. Imagine seeing 12 different anime based in the same world. That will be this novel, with all of these stories interlinked through one main story of Jack. No explainations, but if people ask, then I will give breif explainiations, unless it is important to the plot, at which point I will just say 'No Spoilers'. Sorry for wrong english, I'm tired after writting 3 chapters in one day and my finger jstu commited suidice.
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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthor

Hi guys, I'm here to say that The first 2 chapters are just me setting up the plot. The main stuff starts after, so do read through it.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr

sir_impeccable
sir_impeccableLv4

This is the first time I read something like this. I thought, hey, isn't this one of those niche? But damn, it's a lot more different. and that makes me so curious and anxious, like what next? Would the system guys pay him obedience or will they revolt against him later on? I'm seriously curious and also, I'm wondering how long does he want to exist like that? Then again, I like the fact he seems godlike but yet he is not OP himself. He's just a stragglers trying to survive, growing from weak to strong too. lol. it's a nice read. come join me

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homeofthelostqueen
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great novel please keep up great work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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0PandaFox
0PandaFoxLv14

So this is a good book and I am looking foward to how the mc grows mentally as this is part that many books miss and the mc just get repetitive and annoying. I would also like to ask if you can add a character with the name Sena or have Sena somewhere inthe story? I’ve only hadn by one person do it before and i want to spread my name like a virus just cause I think its funny. Once again thank you for such a good book and hope you finish it with lots of chapters.

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Rainorld
RainorldLv1

I am sorry for this Author, the "spaw" is for zhanye, some brazilians didn't watch the full video of his crimes. I know my apology is not much, just ignore or report the comment that are disturbing you. I didn't read your novel but I want you to have a great future.

4yr
DoBeReading
DoBeReadingLv4

Pogerrs

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DgodRequiem
DgodRequiemLv13

Thank u for takimg the time to create this book I've been looking for a book similar to God Of Games. Just a small question are u going to include the power to revive? cuz I feel like that would take away a lot from ur story. Since u can't really relish life without death.

4yr
Henrietta_Otu
Henrietta_OtuLv4

Great work and a master piece. I just read a few chapter of this novel and I can say it’s unique and attention gripping. The author carefully gives vivid description of scenes and events which is totally refreshing and keeps one wanting more. Good job author. Keep it up.

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Tangerqueen
TangerqueenLv2

Pretty short story so far so not much to comment on. Writing Quality (4.5/5 --> Rounds up to 5/5): There are slight grammatical mistakes, but there is nothing that impedes with my understanding of the storyline. Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to say. Story Development (4/5): I would honestly say that the beginning was a bit too repetitive in terms of how he wished he could have done differently or didn't live as boring of a life. I would have preferred to jump in the action so that it would have hooked me a bittt more, but this is mostly personal preference. Character Design (5/5): Lots of details sprinkled throughout. World Background (5): Many descriptions that help set the tone. Overall, good job!

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