Review Detail of Alokael in Naruto: Time control

Other than the stability of the updates I didn't find anything good about the story. The name interchange is just horrendous to say the least. Gave me an headache. The story has potential but I hardly believe this is readable. Suggesting the author to re- edit or higher someone to edit the story for him. Because at the moment this story might just be something to garner people's curses.