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Alokael2yrCommentedCh 96 Before the Third Test!- Alokael2yrCommentedCh 92 Chunin Exams: The First Test 1!
- Alokael2yrCommentedCh 81 Genin Team Selection
- Alokael2yrReplied to LuminouShadowCh 79 End of Doto
- Alokael2yrCommentedCh 78 Break the Gate! Rally the People!
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Yes, I understand you. And don't worry, 5 chapters a week is plenty. But we will do our best to get those extra chapters off of you. So be ready with more chapters.
But the 500 power stone for extra chap will still go on! I will post 5 chapters each week. There are no fixed schedule. But probably on weekdays as I go out most weekends. So don't freak out if there are no chappies 2 days in a row. Anyway. Hope you are all enjoying the fic. Love you all. - Alokael2yrCommented
This turning out to be better and better... Thank you!
But I did nothing, I simply vanished from their line of sight, as if I was never there to begin with, a fleeting nightmare. A phantom with a blade, that took on a world. - Alokael2yrCommentedCh 74 One Sword to End the War!
- Alokael2yrCommentedCh 70 First Fight in Hot Waters
- Alokael2yrCommentedCh 68 Future thoughts and letters
- Alokael2yrCommentedCh 66 Recap (Ch. 1-62) For returning readers
- Alokael3yrCommentedCh 20 Quietus!
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That was surprising.. Yet feels appropriate. Its iroh after all.
"I know," Iroh smiled, "But siding with Ozai is not your destiny is it?" he whispered the last part, startling the fuck out of me, "Don't panic young Akira, I am not your enemy," - Alokael3yrPosted
Well, I certainly wasn't expecting this kind of novel from you. I have been following the author's Original novel from time to time. It's quite enjoyable as it deals with multiple perspectives of the characters. But this one was a shocker. Can't believe written by the same man. But I have read the first few chapters and they have an unique feel to it. Well friend I wish you good luck with your new work but I hope you will not drop your original.
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Other than the stability of the updates I didn't find anything good about the story. The name interchange is just horrendous to say the least. Gave me an headache. The story has potential but I hardly believe this is readable. Suggesting the author to re- edit or higher someone to edit the story for him. Because at the moment this story might just be something to garner people's curses.