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LuminouShadow
LuminouShadowLv44yr
2021-01-10 16:47

The writing quality is bad, even for translated work standard. And there are proof of this being a plagiarized work. The story itself is in consistent. The name of the MC is simply rage inducing, simply because he doesn't have ONE SINGLE FU**** Name. The writer keeps changing it so much you will feel like punching the person. The story itself doesn't make proper sense. And to those people who are supporting this work, I can only say, you guys have patience befitting a Saint. God bless you all.

Naruto: Time control

Gunitlo
4.0
474 Chs

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Boris147
Boris147Lv10

You are mistaken they used Google translate for translation and copy paste here to make fool of us. He even opened a fucking patreon for this shit.

3yr
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AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5

I've seen this on mtlnovel and comrademao. I thought this version might be an edited mtl like xiaxuenovels but I guess not.

3yr
3
EverRed
EverRedLv1

Wait he did.

Boris147:You are mistaken they used Google translate for translation and copy paste here to make fool of us. He even opened a fucking patreon for this shit.
3yr
4
SrLao
SrLaoLv11

como se llama la versión original?

3yr
1
Lucifer_Keron
Lucifer_KeronLv1

Russian Этот fan-fic был написан уже на русском языке до 6 тома, где он уже в мире клинка, так что работа просто украдена и переводится с другого языка, вот и появилось это неразбериха с именем

3yr
1
Imperador_do_Caos
Imperador_do_CaosLv1

Ja vi isso em algum site chines eu acho

2yr
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ONGFRFR
ONGFRFRLv4

the story is fine but PICK A NAME AND STICK WITH IT STOP CHANGING IT EVERY SENTENCE. if i could i would give a negitive for Character Design just for the name swapping.

4yr

Cursed_Twilight
Cursed_TwilightLv4

I read this, in the naruto world it goes up to 300+ chapters, love interest and Rin and Kurenai in the beginning, then also comes Princess of Loulan and Terumi Mei, I think he has *** with them but in no time he declares himself to any or have a son so in the end after conquering the ninja world and killing all the otsutsuki he leaves this world without saying anything, he simply leaves. The second world is one piece and he meets robin and makes her his maid and starts calling himself a traveler who wants to see different futures, but then I already drunk. After that he goes to one punch, bleach, Fairy Tail, more and always the same thing. He always leaves behind the women who followed him and has no descendants with them, I don't know if in the end he will bring all women together in a new world that he creates more and extremely frustrating, it seems that he does not want to have a family .

4yr
AmiOnigase
AmiOnigaseLv4

This story is so bad... Even I dont know what real name MC have!! In first paragraph, Author use Erase to define MC but in the next sentence it turn out to Yuraishi or something... Then in the next paragraph it change again to another name.. There at least 5 or 6 different name Author use for MC.. For Satan Sake, make up your mind Author, or did you just copy paste this story from another fanfics.... Its so annoying...

4yr
yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14

I don't know if the author's dumb or just tryna p*ss people off but they can't pick a name for the mc, the story isn't amazing either, just a lot of the regular cliches but they did use a different power which is nice.

4yr
ryanrayn
ryanraynLv4

My IQ dropped because reading this thing 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

4yr
ThreePurities
ThreePuritiesLv5

brain hurting.... what is happening.... brain hurting.... what is happening.... brain hurting.... what is happening.... brain hurting.... what is happening....

4yr
R_T66
R_T66Lv2

Steal the translation from Gloxinia, don't be ashamed Well, at least you wouldn't have taken the name adapted non, maybe they wouldn't have burned the theft, they would just have spat for Google translation. Since theft is already a taboo on these resources

3yr
neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5

The translation is just below mtl

3yr
SouthEastWave
SouthEastWaveLv5

Title: 从火影开始掌控时间最新章节 Author: 夜南听风 Summary: 穿越到火影世界，成为拷贝忍者卡卡西兄长的旗木枫夜，发现自己的脑海中多了一个虚幻的时钟，能够改变时间流速。 “速度即力量……宇智波斑，你听说过光速拳吗？” ....................................

4yr
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