Well i am deeply disapointed. It's not that It's bad, but i feel like watching a remake of vikings with a différent MC at this point. So yeah It's not interesting to see MC win juste like ragnar deed, become jarl Just like ragnar deed. In the end i can't help but ask myself if thé MC being itself make sens since Hé Just feel like a copycat. Where is thé originality ? What's thé point of doing a fanfic if you don t try to take another road to get some where better than thé Web série ? What's thé point of existence of our MC here ?
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MC attacked the Kingdom of the Franks, the Kingdom of Northumbria, the Kingdom of Mercia, Wales, Scotland, conquered Norway and seized Pamplona from the Arabs. What did Ragnar do? To make the comparison easier, I omit the political and economic activities in Norway that are introduced by MC. I don't see much in common between MC and Ragnar ... maybe three things. 1) He became Jarl in a similar way. 2) Lagertha. 3) Place of birth, Kattegat.
Much of them ? Didnt he also become king ? Didn't he also attack the Franks ? Didn't he attack england too ? The worst ? The raids were exactly the same in Vikings and your story, the same tactics were used. I only know about what i read, maybe you changed the way your story was going after chapter 80, but it's too late for me. But aren''t all of those point enough as a proof that your MC is a copycat of Ragnar ?
No, because what you write is illogical, because it follows that you have neither watched the series nor read more than 30 chapters. Who was the MC supposed to attack to be different from Ragnar? Who was the future MC to be different from Ragnar? What tactic would the MC use to make it different?
Did you actually read the story? Because I watched all the seasons of the Vikings and this fanfic is going completely different from the series.
Bro. It's 23:40 i won't go back to each chapter of your story to give you each little things which made me feel like your MC was a copycat without any soul. You get it ? Fine. You don't ? Fine. I never said MC had to attack anyone different for god sake, i said that from the raid i saw, the tactics to win were the same. I just don't see any point in your MC since he replicate the way of doing things of Ragnar, therefore i'm not interested in reading what i consider a remake of vikings. Again I don't know about after chapter 80, i don't give a ****. I don't see what's illogical here.
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In addition to the two women who are with him now, he will have another wife, a concubine ... and some adventures on the side. The MC does not spare anyone, unless it serves his purpose.
