It wasn't that bad. I would say that the chapter is engaging and has a good pace. The characters' personalities and emotions are well-portrayed, creating an interesting dynamic between them. However, there are a few areas where the writing could be improved: There are some grammar and punctuation errors throughout the text that need to be fixed for better readability. Characters sometimes provide excessive explanations that could be shortened or rephrased. Some thoughts and actions of characters could be better integrated with the scene, avoiding confusing shifts between internal monologues and external dialogue. I point this out, but I am to lazy to type in each paragraph what you should fix. It's still good, just minimal error. Not the best but better than many other fanfics on WebNovel. Be proud my brother.

TL;DR: The writing quality is generally good with engaging narrative and interesting character interactions, although there are areas that could be improved. The stability of updates is excellent, and the story has a strong foundation with interesting plotlines that delve into the characters' backgrounds and motivations. The characters are well-developed with unique personalities and quirks, and their interactions feel genuine. The world-building is detailed and immersive, making it easy for readers to become engrossed in the story. Best if you read the actual rating below _______________________________________________ [[[Writing Quality: 4/5(Would give you a 5 cause why not) - The writing quality is generally good, with an engaging narrative and interesting character interactions. However, there are some areas where the writing could be improved, such as the dialogue and descriptions, which can occasionally be too lengthy or lack clarity. It is even getting better.]]] [[[Stability of Updates: 5/5 - So far so good]]] [[[Story Development: 5/5 - The story has a strong foundation with interesting plotlines that delve into the characters' backgrounds and motivations. The world of My Hero Academia is well-integrated into the narrative, creating a cohesive and engaging story. Now that 'Read Richards' have been introduced, it seems to be getting more interesting.]]] [[[Character Design: 5/5 - The characters are well-developed, with unique personalities and quirks. Solomon, in particular, stands out as a protagonist with her AI companion, Noah, and her struggles with self-identity. The interactions between characters feel genuine, and their relationships contribute to the story's overall depth.]]] [[[World Background: 5/5 - The fanfic does an excellent job of integrating the My Hero Academia universe into the story, staying true to the original source material while adding new elements. The world-building is detailed and immersive, making it easy for readers to become engrossed in the story.]]]

I like this.

What a good quirk you have there. It would be a shame if someone... stole it.

I reincarnated into My Hero Academia with the Speed Force

Everyone

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What would you like to see in the book?

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My first time writing, so expect some mistakes, spelling mistakes, and little plot holes. Please leave a paragraph comment, chapter comment, and reviews on the book. Critics are allowed. Thanks.

I noticed.

I am planning to use the show don't tell strategy. I don't want to explain everything, I want people to understand... At least, that's what I read that writers should do.

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sorry for the spelling typos 🤣

Stars are very far away suns, so how can he get different power from the same source?