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Brezer
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this could be a good story if it went off the description but it doesn't . the start is inline , guy goes back before the world goes crazy with a system......but does he spend his time getting ready.. nope. there is very little system stuff or training. it devolves into a cliche filled young master type mc trying to manipulate women into his harem/slave system . an example is he says how after the world changes how there is wide spread starvation from lack of food so what does he do next he becomes part owner in a restaurant and then wants to start a chain of them. mc takes a poisoned ninja as a cooking disciple then gives him a system and talks about giving him his cultivation style since none are for sale in the shop but he doesn't then sends him to Africa to kill rebels . (later they are for sale somehow even though he didn't upgrade the system which he is scared to because he doesn't trust but he has been running around like an idiot trying to get friends/slaves/comrads?.. the story starts in a dark place, betrayed by family and friends and the killed . he is mad, angry and wants revenge , ok a good story start but what we get is a guy that makes drama every day chasing women and it gets so convoluted is silly, there is a kidnapping scheme that goes on for chapters that just makes you skip, read a few lines of each chapter to see if it's still taking place if so just go to next chapter till it was over. this mc should be training and getting xp every day but he doesn't, well he fights a lot but he just knocks them out .. but later finds out he gets more xp if he kills them lol this guy is supposed to me a 1k yr old emperor that has climbed through mountains of corpses but he just knocks people out that attack him... if you are bored and want to read a wannabe Japanese /Chinese cultivation story with chan this and chan that (only from the mc not anyone else) and just want a harem story go for it otherwise it's a waste of time even for toilet reading .

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SmilingReader99
SmilingReader99Lv14SmilingReader99

wish I read this before reading

PowerArmorGuy
PowerArmorGuyLv12PowerArmorGuy

Thanks for the heads up.

AutumnSolstice13
AutumnSolstice13Lv4AutumnSolstice13

Thank God I read the comments first 😅😅😅

Redzeth
RedzethLv13Redzeth

You saved me a headache

Diana_Gerth
Diana_GerthLv1Diana_Gerth

I get u

fran007
fran007Lv3fran007

thanks!! i have enough stupid MCs in my library.

grimreaper906
grimreaper906Lv2grimreaper906

Dude, the even for toilet reading got me

Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

thanks for the heads up M8, this sounds utterly atrocious, i saw the description and thought it might be decent... thanks for saving me from reading this garbage

Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

You should read Worlds' Apocalypse Online if you haven't. The mc is decent and he behaves how a person who has been given a second chance should.

ShadowInLight
ShadowInLightLv15ShadowInLight

go look at fallen lightbringer's return. start is kinda like this, mc dies, get sent back to before the system was added and he actually trains and prepares before it starts again

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pitts
pittsLv13pitts

Thanks for headsup. Already have enough MCs that dont make sense

Enlightened_Idiot
Enlightened_IdiotLv2Enlightened_Idiot

Yeah World Apocalypse Online is good but i get dissapointed when he accept a master, I know he didnt step in saint realm and has many flawed skill, but in the beginning I read it, im expecting for the mc to learn by himself but accept a master...and when I read or see a word "my shifu" i get a feeling that im being annoyed and want to drop the Novel.. tell me if im wrong, his master got to the saint realm by himself and our mc cant? and he just accept a master like that, Im expecting for the mc to be stronger without the backing of her master but what I get? mc says: "im a baihua disciple" and he receive a resources from the sect, and her master alone getting stronger when she is young and step into saint realm and our mc cant and needs a sect to be stronger? Im ok for our Mc getting a connection but im not ok mc using a backing of sect to get stronger, sorry for the long comment...

Immortali:You should read Worlds' Apocalypse Online if you haven't. The mc is decent and he behaves how a person who has been given a second chance should.
Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

I know the feeling. At times his master feels like she the mc actually. Remember how she always seem to breakthrough faster than the MC? Or how she defies all common sense and makes the MC's progress seem a little lackluster?

Enlightened_Idiot:Yeah World Apocalypse Online is good but i get dissapointed when he accept a master, I know he didnt step in saint realm and has many flawed skill, but in the beginning I read it, im expecting for the mc to learn by himself but accept a master...and when I read or see a word "my shifu" i get a feeling that im being annoyed and want to drop the Novel.. tell me if im wrong, his master got to the saint realm by himself and our mc cant? and he just accept a master like that, Im expecting for the mc to be stronger without the backing of her master but what I get? mc says: "im a baihua disciple" and he receive a resources from the sect, and her master alone getting stronger when she is young and step into saint realm and our mc cant and needs a sect to be stronger? Im ok for our Mc getting a connection but im not ok mc using a backing of sect to get stronger, sorry for the long comment...
Enlightened_Idiot
Enlightened_IdiotLv2Enlightened_Idiot

ohh... im still in chapter 200, sorry for the lack of information cause i feel depressed when he is proud that his master are stronger than him... mc thought when talking to someone: "you didnt know my master is a Saint Realm"...thats why I just paused reading this, I have a question, is her master step above saint realm? if he still rely on his master and the backing of the sect to get stronger, it will impossible for me to go back to read this Novel, (Im still reading this if mc didnt use her backing, and just want to correct his flawed skill to his master)

Immortali:I know the feeling. At times his master feels like she the mc actually. Remember how she always seem to breakthrough faster than the MC? Or how she defies all common sense and makes the MC's progress seem a little lackluster?
Enlightened_Idiot
Enlightened_IdiotLv2Enlightened_Idiot

yeah, and im just curious why theres no comment asking why mc feels like not an actual mc and her master is like a real mc...

Immortali:I know the feeling. At times his master feels like she the mc actually. Remember how she always seem to breakthrough faster than the MC? Or how she defies all common sense and makes the MC's progress seem a little lackluster?
Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

At pg 200 I think the master is still a saint. A very strong saint. Later it's revealed they have a very interesting and unique connection due to time travel. It's not romantic though. **************SPOILER ALERT**************SPOILER ALERT********** *********************************************************************** ****In the distant past he was her senior.****** Anyway, she always manages to stay like 2 realms/levels above him. He never seem to catch up. She doesn't appear often in the story but whenever she does she still ahead surprisingly. She also seems to have more dramatic breakthroughs. ***********************************************************

Enlightened_Idiot:ohh... im still in chapter 200, sorry for the lack of information cause i feel depressed when he is proud that his master are stronger than him... mc thought when talking to someone: "you didnt know my master is a Saint Realm"...thats why I just paused reading this, I have a question, is her master step above saint realm? if he still rely on his master and the backing of the sect to get stronger, it will impossible for me to go back to read this Novel, (Im still reading this if mc didnt use her backing, and just want to correct his flawed skill to his master)
Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

Hahaha! I've had that kind of question numerous times. I have seen issues in various books and surprisingly no one seems to bother commenting about the same. All I see is a bunch of complimenting comments and some jokes.

Enlightened_Idiot:yeah, and im just curious why theres no comment asking why mc feels like not an actual mc and her master is like a real mc...
Enlightened_Idiot
Enlightened_IdiotLv2Enlightened_Idiot

now im being annoyed... its like mc cant overpower his master, its understandable if he is not using a cheat like a war god systen cause our mc is not a genius and its takes many years to get into higher realm, but you know, mc have a war god system which can help him achieved high, and then the result is he cant overpower or maybe compare to his master, even though he has a war god system, and now it come to the point were we think her master is the true mc, and not her..... maybe im just overthinkng things, and her system can only give him skill or like that?

Immortali:At pg 200 I think the master is still a saint. A very strong saint. Later it's revealed they have a very interesting and unique connection due to time travel. It's not romantic though. **************SPOILER ALERT**************SPOILER ALERT********** *********************************************************************** ****In the distant past he was her senior.****** Anyway, she always manages to stay like 2 realms/levels above him. He never seem to catch up. She doesn't appear often in the story but whenever she does she still ahead surprisingly. She also seems to have more dramatic breakthroughs. ***********************************************************
Enlightened_Idiot
Enlightened_IdiotLv2Enlightened_Idiot

maybe every people has different taste?

Immortali:Hahaha! I've had that kind of question numerous times. I have seen issues in various books and surprisingly no one seems to bother commenting about the same. All I see is a bunch of complimenting comments and some jokes.
Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

The author has hinted she might have a very mysterious background than we are currently aware. I don't what it is but she might have own cheat codes to carry her through. Seems pretty important to the plot though.

Enlightened_Idiot:now im being annoyed... its like mc cant overpower his master, its understandable if he is not using a cheat like a war god systen cause our mc is not a genius and its takes many years to get into higher realm, but you know, mc have a war god system which can help him achieved high, and then the result is he cant overpower or maybe compare to his master, even though he has a war god system, and now it come to the point were we think her master is the true mc, and not her..... maybe im just overthinkng things, and her system can only give him skill or like that?