So this novel in my own personal words it's, Plot is not bad is pretty, Not bad beginnings... But, Background information is lacking D historical, Pot of history doesn't make sense, Because all of the major viewpoints or building in washer is way too unexpected and also does not match the history of the world you just made, Because all of the major viewpoints or building in washer is way too unexpected and also does not match the history of the world you just made But also including that your characters are not being showed at much as other novels, Basically TA mention but does not really choose any details in your story or the character themselves, The plot is pretty good but the main problem I have with this story is, Mute sleeping more details and makes up more sense in your story, So in summary, You're story lacks details also lacks to store CO thanks to exists in this world, And also lacks details of your character doesn't even make me connect to them or make sense of what you leading to so many problems but the plot is pretty good in my personal opinion, But that's what I see with you novel white now.
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Bruh the thing that lacks the most is your english!
