Basics first. The chapters are just one whole, huge, paragraph. If the lack of spacing isn't bad enough, the dialogue is also - for some unknown reason - integrated into these huge paragraphs. Oh did I mention that on average the chapters are 300 words? Let's forget about the aforementioned for a moment. What truly ruins the story is its content: story development. As of chapter 8, the author reveals MC's country not only accepts same-se'x marriage, but gender equality has been completely achieved! This in a world setting based on the Dark Ages! The historical realism is completely ruined, any reader with an iota of historical knowledge is left in a state of complete disbelief. How people are rating this story 5 stars if they're actually following the rating metrics is beyond me.

Very good unfortunately the updates are taking too long . . . ?. . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . .

Interesting start. I will wait for updates. I hope the author does not give up, but many people give up writing.

This is great more please. .

I recommend this book to whoever sees this only be prepared to wait a day or two maybe more sometimes for a new chapter and pls keep in mind that not every book is supposed to be based off of real life and not every book can be perfect so yeah have a nice read

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Cerita ini memiliki banyak kelebihan seperti Tidak pasaran, alur yang bagus, plot yang menarik, dan saya suka, kekurangannya adalah Penulisannya yang tidak rapi. Secara keseluruhan Cerita ini layak untuk dibaca tapi kalian harus teliti karena cara penulisan si pengarang kurang rapi dan bagus.

great thing here, love it mate. ................................................................................,...........................

So this novel in my own personal words it's, Plot is not bad is pretty, Not bad beginnings... But, Background information is lacking D historical, Pot of history doesn't make sense, Because all of the major viewpoints or building in washer is way too unexpected and also does not match the history of the world you just made, Because all of the major viewpoints or building in washer is way too unexpected and also does not match the history of the world you just made But also including that your characters are not being showed at much as other novels, Basically TA mention but does not really choose any details in your story or the character themselves, The plot is pretty good but the main problem I have with this story is, Mute sleeping more details and makes up more sense in your story, So in summary, You're story lacks details also lacks to store CO thanks to exists in this world, And also lacks details of your character doesn't even make me connect to them or make sense of what you leading to so many problems but the plot is pretty good in my personal opinion, But that's what I see with you novel white now.