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ClaisiceLouice
ClaisiceLouiceLv13yr
2021-08-17 23:29

I love how sci-fi and romance were both at play in this story. the writing quality was great, there were few errors but I love the play of words and the combination of poetry and prose within the writing style. it's beautiful. the characters and world background were also amazing. Overall, it is an amazing work of art. keep it up!

3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

Gaureeey
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15 Chs

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hey i appreciate all the help so much

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le_shounenboi
le_shounenboiLv1

As I read this story, it really touched me. The author has used such beautiful poetic imagery that cannot be described. I must say that the author is putting a lot of effort into this work which can be seen through the thorough research work carried out to give us some phenomenal material to read. This story is excellent, and I can only see it grow further and blossom into a truly marvellous story of the sci-fi genre.

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phoenixhyperion
phoenixhyperionLv13

Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!

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Happy_Person_8656
Happy_Person_8656Lv1

I had a wonderful time reading this. It's beautiful, complex and genuinely heartwarming. I felt pity for the MC which shows that the character writing was evidently impressive. The concept is captivating and the way the author has written the plot is truly commendable, as I didn't feel confused at any point. Above all, the description of a future era gives the novel the precise tint of sci fi that makes the book enjoyable. I could go on and on, but I don't wanna seem exaggerated so, I just wanna say that this is actually "really good". Overall, wonderful work, Author! Summed up in two words (cuz one isn't enough): TRULY SOUL-STIRRING

3yr
Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

Finally! Something different! Not "CEO daddy, CEO mumy, CEO something, etc..." I loved movies like "Equilibrium", "Minority Raport", "Butterfly effect", etc. so I admire the concept of your story. It is a very interesting idea... I hope you will bear with the importance of the difficult topic ;) I wish all the best with that!

4yr
Nikkie_LZ
Nikkie_LZLv12

A masterpiece! This type of writing is what I aspire to be. Lǎoshī I am in your care. It's a unique gem, shining by its singularity. The range and capacity of language this author's uses is wonderful. If you like science fiction, try this one. The protagonist actions and the whole range of expression is very fascinating. This book is meant to be tasted slowly, and you might be surprise because each taste is very different. But addictive. You never can't get enough.

3yr
catvi
catviLv5

There is actual science in this. The MC doesn't go back in time just because of "feelings" and "I regret this!". He actually modeled the timelines. But that's not the best part of this story, it's the character interaction. The kids, his sister. Highly recommended.

3yr
Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11

There was someone who once told me that "things shouldn't be made out of impulse but with much deliberation and researches" That's what comes to my mind as I read this beautiful piece. The efforts and emotions put in each word and lines is overwhelmingly good. I felt different mix emotions reading this. I really 100000000x recommended this story to everyone out there. And I would really look forward to more update. Thank you author for writing this wonderful novel and I hope to see this reach higher levels. This novel deserve a lot of things.

4yr
MYSTERIOUSPEN_1424
MYSTERIOUSPEN_1424Lv2

Oh my god what a story ! I just liked all the words in the story and if I want to say specifically it has so many English terms that I don't know😂 lol but that made me curious to know more English terms from your story and the description you gave in this story made me to think about the main characters and for last this is the best book I ever read !

4yr
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Lv4

Quite the interesting story right here. Tbh I'm not really a fan to science-fic because there's to many stuff to research. You did well as an author and researched most of the science problems that could result from time travel for that I applaud. Keep going forward with your story, don't give up half-way for the reason that you don't have views because you'll realize as you write day by day the fact that there will be a small following always looking forward to seeing your story going forward. Good luck forward, and don't get discouraged in what you're trying to do. P.S Even myself I type who writes dark stuff can feel the emotions you want to share to the viewer in the MC agony of reliving the moments his soulmate perished. This part got me good, with that limbo of the mind.

4yr
AnaRose
AnaRoseLv1

The descriptions and metaphors here were so damn good! It was explained so well I loved reading it. The romance element is very intriguing and will keep people hooked! Interesting plot too! Good work Author!

4yr
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