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Morpheus146
Morpheus146Lv44yr
2021-01-05 05:39

Quite the interesting story right here. Tbh I'm not really a fan to science-fic because there's to many stuff to research. You did well as an author and researched most of the science problems that could result from time travel for that I applaud. Keep going forward with your story, don't give up half-way for the reason that you don't have views because you'll realize as you write day by day the fact that there will be a small following always looking forward to seeing your story going forward. Good luck forward, and don't get discouraged in what you're trying to do. P.S Even myself I type who writes dark stuff can feel the emotions you want to share to the viewer in the MC agony of reliving the moments his soulmate perished. This part got me good, with that limbo of the mind.

3 hours - A Gamble Of Time.

Gaureeey
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Gaureeey
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thank you for your honest review, means loadssss!!! I was never a fan of sci-fi either but i thought this concept would be so much better once imagined! I'm glad, from chapter 8 onwards things are less science-y hehe please bare with it if youd wanna read further ! thank uuuuu

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As I read this story, it really touched me. The author has used such beautiful poetic imagery that cannot be described. I must say that the author is putting a lot of effort into this work which can be seen through the thorough research work carried out to give us some phenomenal material to read. This story is excellent, and I can only see it grow further and blossom into a truly marvellous story of the sci-fi genre.

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I had a wonderful time reading this. It's beautiful, complex and genuinely heartwarming. I felt pity for the MC which shows that the character writing was evidently impressive. The concept is captivating and the way the author has written the plot is truly commendable, as I didn't feel confused at any point. Above all, the description of a future era gives the novel the precise tint of sci fi that makes the book enjoyable. I could go on and on, but I don't wanna seem exaggerated so, I just wanna say that this is actually "really good". Overall, wonderful work, Author! Summed up in two words (cuz one isn't enough): TRULY SOUL-STIRRING

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A masterpiece! This type of writing is what I aspire to be. Lǎoshī I am in your care. It's a unique gem, shining by its singularity. The range and capacity of language this author's uses is wonderful. If you like science fiction, try this one. The protagonist actions and the whole range of expression is very fascinating. This book is meant to be tasted slowly, and you might be surprise because each taste is very different. But addictive. You never can't get enough.

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Oh my god what a story ! I just liked all the words in the story and if I want to say specifically it has so many English terms that I don't know😂 lol but that made me curious to know more English terms from your story and the description you gave in this story made me to think about the main characters and for last this is the best book I ever read !

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The protagonist needs a break🤧🤧🤧🤧 I feel his pain and I'm not even married yet.🤧🤧🤧 Please just let him be happy for once. Such a poor soul🤧🤧🤧

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