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heavenlyundead
heavenlyundeadLv154yr
2021-01-06 20:25

I went to look at the raw, it's just fucking cliche after cliche after cliche, it doesn't get any better. this is a story made by person who saw all the popular shite that was trending and copied all the plot lines from them. 0 f u cking originality, heck "the plagiarist" should give his author name to this guy, at least that guy tries to make a decent story. also if you poor f u c kers think i am exaggerating go read the upcoming chapters whether raw or if they decided to release it. i can't believe i wasted my time reading so many chapters.

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Usagi_mofu
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Let's say this first. In every Chinese novel there is face-slapping, in some more and others less, we clear? Yes, there happens to a lot of face slaps and most likely there will be a lot more. Ok, basically the mc touches beasts with his body parts and he will immediately know everything about the said beast/pet. The methods to evolution, curing illneses, potential upgrades ect. Now, there exist an occupation called beastmaster tamers whatever so you will know how the face-slaps gonna end. Ok, the mc is just overpowered in his said occupation not in actual strength. Many can kill him though the mc isn't weak either. Okay, now only if you read the later chapters (35 - 40) you would know there is LOTM vibes going on here. (Lord of the mysteries) the mc having his ability (museum) is gonna gather random people into a room where the guests can ask question about their pets to evolve, cure whatever in exchange samples of rare beasts (or other items in the future) Translation - 5* (smooth) SoU - 5* (trial read, always 5 stars) Story Development - 5* (Biased cuz I like the LOTM vibes and sort of copy) Character Design - 3* (There's emotion but not really a solid personality, average?) World Background - 2* (There's no info given, sure where the mc lives and some here and there but it's basically it's name and it's surroundings, no info at all. Maybe in future will it be explained but can't give a high rating. I know it's unfair because only 40 chapters but I am a honest man, have a nice day everyone) Total score: 4.0

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