Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 stars Writing quality It s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story development Now i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character design Now, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39). Update stability Well, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World background I don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 stars Overall 2.6
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LIKEI had some grammar mistakes there and there as i wrote on phone and didn t pay attention, but i think u guys understand what i mean
no we don't it was mtl level bad maybe not but still terrible
Cry_Maker:I had some grammar mistakes there and there as i wrote on phone and didn t pay attention, but i think u guys understand what i mean
Idk how u don t understand what i said regarding the review but u do u 🙂
