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Oto
OtoLv144yr
2020-12-14 14:19

I enjoyed the first 60 chapters, but the author really dropped the ball afterwards. I’ve been reading the MTL (at around c.250) and its literally the same plot over and over. The MC sends out people to do some task and right before they can complete it they are overwhelmed by the enemy and the MC has to expand the territory to save them with his avatar. Rinse repeat. Nothing is ever accomplished by his subordinates without help from the MC who saves them every time. It’s literally all the plot ever is. MC is about to have enough experience to upgrade his territory? You know there will be some fight that happens right as he upgrades which coincidentally includes everyone within his territory so that he can save them. Also, the upgrading has essentially no effect on the novel other than adding another wall that isnt even used. No additional systems, no changes to the story. Utter disappointment of a novel.

I Have An Impenetrable Fortress

August Eagle
4.4
60 Chs

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Kugo_Eco
Kugo_EcoLv12

thanks for the review, won't even start this... I suggest you to read "global game: AFK in the zombie apocalypse". Based on your reading history I think you'll like it

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ultimate_boredom
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Tldr: Support this book, if you like op mc establishing his hegemony in politically complex world. I feel positively surprised that this book got selected for trial read. I have already read all the raw ongoing chapters in the Google translate. I even made an account on Chinese Qidian to support the author by buying all the chapters. My review will obviously be quite biased but it's my honest opinion. The mc has an invincible city system. He is basically the god there, omniscient and omnipresent kind. Not just that, every time system upgrades, the city area increases almost exponentially. The catch is: time limit. He has one year for the system and needs to find fragments to increase system time. The characters are likeable and provide great support to mc and the plot. The mc is smart and makes preparations for the future. The antagonists aren't necessarily villains and the mc is destined to be an invader. There is political and diplomatic relations involved throughout the story I especially like the cultivation realms with different systems (as in Taoism, Buddhism, martial art, demon) but they are divided into different arithmetic numbers and a name for that specific realm with no small division of early, mid etc. This gives an intuitive judgement of one's strength without appearing bland. Leapfrogging realms is difficult but possible for one or two stages. There is still much in store with the novel but the author had been inconsistent with updates lately in contrast to huge number of updates initially. This might be due to lower popularity of this book in comparison to his other works. The creator of novel is a full time author. Please support him.

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DigBick
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Title: I Have An Impenetrable Fortress/我有一座无敌城 Rating: N/A Status: 420(Ongoing) Start Date: 2020/06 Author other work: History’s Strongest Senior Brother, History’s Number 1 Founder, I’ve Possessed the Demon Sovereign’s Body.

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Grandmist_Sage
Grandmist_SageLv11

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

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Xhaare
XhaareLv15

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ImNotNarcissistic
ImNotNarcissisticLv12

Based on the synopsis, we can conclude that this is a kingdom building novel. It’s written by the author of HN1F , August Eagle, and novels written by August Eagle are always great! Though I’m a bit sad that the previous novel in trial read wasn’t picked, I hope this one will be.

4yr
Tyrannical_Book
Tyrannical_BookLv3

hmmm.. so he is Lord Turtle sounds good novel to me😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂😊😊😂😂😊😂😊😂😊😊😂

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Daoist_Rav
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Demonic_Master
Demonic_MasterLv4

I like this novel, the title says it all, the MC is OP while in the fortress but not outside. If you like OP protagonists with some kingdom building elements, give it a try.

4yr
Lazy_Prince
Lazy_PrinceLv6

This novel is somewhat similar to Anchestor Above. The purpose of the system is to dominate the world, and It’s a bit disappointing to me. I don’t mind mc rulling a place and developed it into the stongest place but to rulling the world with messy government is... no to me. I’ll give this novel 3/5

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