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yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv144yr
2020-11-13 07:34

The grammar is the worst I've seen for a second, you forget words, you add words, you forget commas your (s), you add (s) when their not needed, the beginning you didnt capitalize, there's something wrong in literally every paragraph, I wouldn't be surprised if it was every sentence, and the worst part if it was an enjoyable story but you ruined it.

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AvaDumont
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Have you noticed the lack of periods? Like that can't just be me lol.

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