Review Detail of Glenstonx in To You, Six Hundred Years From Now.

Hi author! I was really shocked by the longevity of your chapter, it is nice to read knowing that the author updates consistently with long chapters too! I may not give you a long review like you did to mine but I'll just give you what I think so far of your book. The grammar is pretty tense(in a good way) and the descriptions creative as well, thought I barely had an idea of what or who is the character at first (saved my the word empress) but as soon as I read some more I got to know the MC. The character seems to be dissociative due to probably some shock or anything negative that that happened to her and its great as a prologue because it hooks the reader what made her like that. The issues I noticed are some errors which you have mistyped, the Shifting of capitalization to lowercase and punctuations. I hope you would edit those and correct them, I think your book has great potential, so keep writing you're doing a good job!